You know this was a long time coming, waiting for the Sunset chapter(s), and you know what? You sure as hell didn't disappoint. The other chapters were full of lust, but this one? Genuine romance, and it definitely makes the difference.

That being said...Twilight is being awfully, well, casual about being pregnant. You know, considering it's no longer a "what if" and instead she definitely has this in her future, telling her parents she is pregnant, dealing with the ramifications...you get the idea.

Only one chapter left? That's impossible!

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Magic makes a big difference.

wonderful But only one chapter left?!

7841389 I am kinda hoping their reaction is going to be more on the tune of "grandchildren!!" and "honey, you are marrying into effective royalty of a magical world with a girl that will support all of your wildest dreams. We're more than OK with that"

One more thing I'd like to see in this story yet would be Twilight dominating sunset. Hard. With a strap on twice as thick and half again as long as bacon horse's, with a big pregnant belly. Just to show who's the real boss. And because it'd be hot as hell

Edit: and I still say a story with AJ+RD's relationship would be awesome. Just saying

The master/slave kink is not really something I enjoy to be honest - I tried reading it at least, but in the end I just skimmed that bit.
I have no doubt that there are a lot of people who loved what you did there though.

However I loved how Sunset, after all of it, went into full on concerned mode. That was sweet.

So, the inevitable happened. Big surprise

I wonder what the information was that Sunset has. That the rest of the girls can't have kids as they're not native to Equestria or some such?
Guess we'll see eventually!

Twilight seems pretty chill considering that having a kid at this point could destroy her future.

She's also way to forgiving and trusting of her "friends", I mean, if they're willing to make a game out something that could have such devastating consequences on her well being then what other things would they be willing to do to her if it amused them?

7844723 If you read this story for realistic emotions, consequences, actions, and story flow, I'm not entirely sure why you're still here. Ya don't read or watch porn for the story.

teenage pregnancy seems to be as normal as SAT's

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I can't wait to see how the other Rainbooms React.
Which ones sputter Twi pregeant BABY!!...UUUUHHHH THUD!"

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Seems like an Applejack thing.

7847164 Drace has a pregnancy fetish, so it is in his stories, but I hope you're not talking about real life as well, because that's just not true.

 She was dedicated to the roll;

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Sunset isn't yellow. She's peach. That was the only thing in this chapter that bothered me (kept seeing Fluttershy's cock (since she is in fact yellow)).

Still cute end to the chapter.

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229,715 teen pregnancies in 2015 is still quite a high number. But yeah, it's ~ 1/4th of SAT test takers.

That was...nice, but after the Fall Formal I’m team Rarity X Twilight (RariTwi/Rarilight/RariSparkle)

“I’m back, Twilight, Fluttershy got a phone call and as soon as she got it she said she had to g--ohhhh.” Spike’s familiar voice filled the room, sounding chipper at first until the dog walked right in. He caught the sight of the two girls close by, clearly both naked underneath the covers with Sunset practically mounting his master. The dog’s eyes went wide - though not nearly as wide as that of the two women - and his voice rang out just as quickly as it had appeared. “--annnnd I think I’ll go see what Pinkie Pie is doing. Uh...uhm...sorry.”

Spike: fuck this shit I'm out