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LordAlastrayus
I got an idea for a story stuck in my head. Now I'm writing it.
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Damn cliffhanger.
Next chapter ! Please hurry !
7480046 I am, I am lol, should be out today or tomorrow. I've come down with something and am stuck in bed, with nothing else to do but read and write. Bad luck for me, but the chapter will now be out faster than before.
Just read the first love it keep themailing coming when ya can get well soon :)
Damn cliffhangers.
You evil evil basted stop with the cliff-hangers.
More cliffhangers.
7483971 but they make such a good stopping point...
OH so the journal was Twilights/Sunsets communication thingy...huh wonder who made the second one then, Sunset?
ANY WHO, wow he sure did survive...i hope he does not have TOO much of a grudge. It does not seem that way, but after being in stone for so long. Also nice way to foreshadow upcoming things concerning Celestia's strange way of connecting herself to the Aether.
OHHHH i hope to see what you do next mate.
7484477 I know that's why there evvvii---iillll.
(read with a whiny voice)
i wonder if there side effect of being stone for so long? like what happen was really bad but maybe it delayed grief and anger denial it wasn't so bad but i would be depressed if that happen but hide it with silver lining in the bad.
7485658 Well, he might be a little out of touch with his sympathy. After reading about them for so long they're more like fictional characters then real sentient being to him. He'd still save someone in danger, but if you told him about a city that got destroyed he probably wouldn't care since he wasn't around for it. If it doesn't happen near him
Best knowledge spirit and codex journal ever.
7487190 yup
Well after reading this i got to say, .....I'm touching myself tonight.....
i wonder if twilight shall remember it a library and not a playground so must behave cause she a guest.
Oh my.
Damn you cliff-hanger god why do you exists
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Well, Twilight might or might not be at the Doorstep to the Worlds largest and most complete Library.
I hope it doesn't get too crazy.
More than that I am looking forward to the meeting of Shade and Celestia/Luna
God dammit shade, they're basically your children! You aren't supposed to force your children to do things you find tedious! ... never mind thats parenting.
7492580 You are suppose to encourage your children to be successful, to do things that will improve their lives, such as starting businesses.
Edit: Also get them to give you money when you grow old and don't feel like working.
Really Codex. Knowledge Inc.
I thought better of you, but in the end you can t have a castle without swimming in dem Bits like Scrooge Mc. Duck
7492862 He could have called it worse things. The flimsy journal, Straight out of the Codex, Shopquick, FTPP (For the progress of ponies), Codex enterprises, FH (For Harmony), Global future. He's great with runes, not names.
Ow... my brain hurts
So he tasked Codex to take over the financial world?
7492963 Basically yeah, Shade want's to be a rich castle owner.
This is sooo good. Ooo ooo I wana know why Celestia connect to the aether realm if it made her killable in a sense. Also I think a funny way to troll twilight would be to say sure you can enter my library if you bring me some new relevant knowledge. (get it because that would be almost impossible you'd have to ask Celestia herself for something like that.)
Just noticed this story, and I'll probably start with the prequel soon... but I just wanted to point out that you misspelled "Peace" in the story description. Unless you really did mean that the speaker wanted to live in legumes.
7495833 Thanks lol
I LOVE the story so far. It's interesting to follow shade through this journey and just the right amount of humor keeps it fresh. Keep it up!
I love the story and i am looking forward to read next chapter when is it out again?
Hmm, time for shade to start up a company, would be interesting to see it take form, so reading about it taking form could be fun.
Keep up the good work.
Oh right, have him ask Celestia about why she is suicidal.... that could be a fun conversation... (Celestia connection to the aether realm makes her die if cut. Mentioned in earlier chapter.)
7501121 I have family over, but new chapter should be out tomorrow or day after
This is a freaking amazing story I just read both of your story in a single day just couldn't put it down, I loved it so much.
I just wish it would be slightly longer.
7505821 Thanks, glad you liked it so far!
More please
More! More! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!
New chap fuck yeah!!
No not the cliffhanger!
Oh good god Wall Of Text.
I say rarity because his new store ran here out of business.
7600385 his new store ran here out of buisness? Am I just not reading that correctly, or does it make no sense?
She could be an element bearer, (Not twilight, not a princess, or a side character like vinyl scratch, since she will end up killing him, maybe, CLIFFHANGER) so if you guys n gals want to lay out names, or interesting suggestions, I might pick one.
The reason I say rarity is because with the parameters that are given she is the most likely choice in trying to kill him. The reason I say this is because out of the mane caricatures there are only two he can really affect negatively with knowledge ink. and, since apple jack provides her product in quality and balk plus here family that is spread out threw Equestria I can see them working together and making a prophet. Where as rarity dose Costume orders for individuals the appearance of a store that can provide similar services at a cheaper cost and is more convenient will make it harder for rarity to git a clientele that will travel to Ponnyvill for something that they can git from a store that is down the street and seeing as this is around the time she expands to Canterlot having a hit like that can force a business to go under this is usually what happens when a store like wall-mart or cos co comes in to the mix specialist stores go under and those who provide there services cheap and in balk will flourish. This becomes even more prevalent because there is no fast way to communicate like the internet for her clients to order something and have it shipped. This scenario you set up in you're story is the same one that plagued small business owners in the 90's and early 2000's and is the reason why a lot of stores shut down or switched to providing for there corporate overlords.
7600834 Hmm, I might agree, but past episodes like when fluttershy was a model, established rarity is the type to silently resent, and bottle that emotion. In all likely hood she would just dislike him strongly, but not strongly enough for murder alone in that. I suppose I could have her be suspicious about everything he does, and become certain he has evil intentions. I plan on "Her" being a best friend/love interest, (Don't worry this isn't going to get full on romantic ever), and rarity could potentially fake that. I suppose out of the elements it would be between her and rainbow dash for most fitting pick. (Be pretty interesting to see RD struggle over which loyalty to choose after all) Either or would make an interesting arc. With changes of course, I don't allow big spoilers.
Thanks for the suggestion/feedback, and thanks for reading!
Good first chapter. Nice exposition. It was not boring.
7622060 Thanks
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He technically is the Spirit of Knowledge and with that the Spirit of Books. I doubt Twilight would kill the Spirit of Books!
I call it! It's a female book!
Huh. Didn't see that coming. So the book is male. Well, the book is still fun.
At least Twilight knocks. I was expecting her to tear down the door or a wall in her crazy search of knowledge!
Honestly, this scene reminded me of up, where the boy knocks on the door of the house while it is up in the air. Just so unexpected and crazy and rather good comparison. Might even be an intentional reference?