Twilight is in the mood to flex her creative muscle and write a story. But when she gets her parchment and quill out, her mind comes to a complete halt. What does she write about? Her idea bank is completely empty.
What to do? Well, why not ask the mare whose mind is always flowing with new and random thoughts?
Random idea I had
This was...existential
Good job. Just noticed a few mistakes:
Shone.
?
Everyone can relate to this
It kind of feels like this story went absolutely nowhere.
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Perhaps that was the point...?
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Well, the long description pitches it as a story focused on Pinkie giving Twilight new ideas. However, because that isn't actually the story's main thrust, it shouldn't be presented as such.
And even if the intended point of the story is that sometimes nothing happens, it didn't come across that way. It felt like there was supposed to be something here, but whatever that something was, it just ended up getting left out.
I dunno. Wasn't really my thing.
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Yep, I was kinda thrown off by the description, too.
That was amazing! I'd give this story a 8/10.
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You sir, are a great story writer
I'm the exact opposite of Twilight. I have the ideas but I'm too dumb to execute them.
Well, that was a story that happened. You know your random idea stories have a tendency to be very entreating. Good job.
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Hey, you pulled it off pretty well Twi- I mean Nordryd.
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Hey, me too! I have a bunch of ideas but no time or inspiration to actually write them
I never metajoke I didn't like.
More seriously, yeah, I can relate.
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You're a monster
7475623 I should be punished
for every pun I shed
do not leave a puny shred
of my punnish head!
Ah, writer's block. It sucks.
That said, I think Twilight's more of an analytical sort than creative.
*is fending off an attack of plot bunnies* I can't say I relate to this much, but at least it was funny. The idea they ended up with threw me for a loop as I tried to think about how many clueless authors that makes...
It wasn't. While I wouldn't say it's exactly stellar or hilarious, it is an enjoyable slice of life that I can easily see happening in the actual series.
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This is punderous,man.
Therefore this is pun-itive
It wasn't written with a puncil.
And that's my opunion.
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7475047 Thanks.
A couple days ago I heard a song about wanting to write song and coming up short. Here it is:
Coincidence that this story kind of does the same? I think not! I believe fate is telling me something... but what?
What about a world where there's nothing to write about AND there's no candy!?!
7533711 THE HORROR!!!!
This story is like watching someone on TV watching TV
That was so funny! The ending was totally unpredictable but at the same time very predictable.
Also Pinkie Pie was very show accurate. Very clever story!
Huh. Reminds me whenever I'm trying to put together a new story and I've got nothing.