I was challenged to write a cute short story, so this is the cutest thing I could come up with. Have some more Fluttershy x Bloomberg
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Hahaha, nice
What did I just read?
Anyhow, it's quite... interesting... But it's too short/fast and kinda strange... Not that strange is bad... :P
D'oooooooh! Cute!
Though I thought Bloomberg was in Aaaaaaah-paloosa?
(I've wanted to try to write a Bloomberg / Tom shipping story. I have no idea how I'd get it going, though.)
42956
bloomberg/tom??? thatd be freaking awesome. if you ever write it, let me know.
and ima be honest, this story was weird but pretty decent
Sequel. Now. Please?
43450
Have you read "I'd Like to Be a Tree"?
43551 Herp a Derp. Sorry about that. My apologies.
I think its cute how the shy one fell in love with a tree
now is this a prequel or a precursor to "I'd Like to Be a Tree"?
Either way that was some ****ed up ****!
This however was just **** (I am NOT going to use that word to describe writing this year!)
I'll be looking at your other writing because of this.
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This story was meant to be a one-off "what's the cutest thing i can write" fic and it just so happens to fit in with the continuity of the other story.
This is a serious downgrade from "I'd Like to Be a Tree", and I'm not saying so because of the lack of..."crude material". I'm saying so because the way you wrote the story is more telling than showing.
95919
Yeah, I cranked this story out in half an hour and really didn't put too much thought into it. The main point of it is "how cute is it?" (the only thing the story is being judged on) whether than writing a very well-put together story
Cute, but strange. Nice writing.
OH SWEET CELESTIA! I have to stop reading mature fics. Strange images about this fic flashing in my head...MAKE IT STOP!
adorable. Makes me forget the disturbing-yet-arousing-yet-funny story you wrote, I'd Like To Be A Tree... OH SHIT! I'M THINKIN' ABOUT IT! TWILIGHT! HIT ME WITH ANOTHER MEMORY WIPE! AAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRGH!!!
*applause*