Zugzwang has a reputation in the criminal world for being cold and heartless, and for calculating his every crime to perfection. All qualities that Honey Words finds irresistible. Unfortunately for her, Zugzwang has no time for love; he's too fixated on his rivalry with the genius detective and combat expert, Phillip Finder.
So Honey does what any girl would do: she locks Phillip Finder in a deathtrap and leaves Zugzwang clues to find him with. Are either of them amused? No. Will they play along anyway? Well, there's not many other choices...
Set in the Phillip Finder universe by PonyJosiah13, before Phillip moves to Ponyville.
Chapters (5)
Oh Honey/Yandere-chan, you and I both know Senpai will never notice you...
Warned you, didn't I?
...why do I feel like some of those schemes involve a sharp knife and Phil's more... sensitive areas?
Well well well...
I'm surprised you could be this brutal, Magic!
*boop*
Why is the last section in bold?
7752923 Eep! I don't know what you're talking about! You saw nothing!
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These glasses let me see EVERYTHING missy. *boops*
why do I get a serious harley quinn vibe?
I'm personally a bit surprised that Honey can simultaneously be relatively good at strategy and puzzles, and yet still be such an idiot.
Also, she said that she heard Phil's "dying scream," but also said that the crystalide swallowed Phil alive, a clear contradiction.
7941189 All her intelligence leaves her when she starts getting mad. She has never fallen for anypony as hard as she's fallen for Zugzwang, and by that same token, has never been as mad at anypony as much as she is at Phillip Finder. She's not used to controlling such powerful emotions.
...well this was a thing that happened.
this is a pretty good chapter. i'd recommend going through slowly to see the few sentence structure errors you go. nothing too major. a missing space after a quotation mark here, a line break there.