• Member Since 21st Feb, 2014
  • offline last seen Jul 5th, 2018

BlndDog


A veritable suppository of knowledge on the accurate use of words

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The worst has passed for Morning Breeze. He survived the tropical fever, and he has found himself a home at the Baltimare Orphanage. He should be happy and he knows it. Even his voice has returned. Nothing is wrong...

Right?

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I liked the dialogue, but I think it could use a bit more action. Otherwise you did an awesome job. Keep it up!

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Thanks. I'll keep that in mind. :pinkiehappy:

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