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Wonderbolts Have a show soon in ponyville but the streak twins want to have some good time with their best friend Soarin. At the same time Rarity, Applejack and Rainbow Dash are planning to have a girls night out. Will the to partys meet and how will the show end up. (TAKES PLACE RIGHT AFTER THE EPISODE A CANTERLOT WEDDING Season 2 Episode 25/26)

This story has a sequel called Rainbows and jealousy.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 42 )

7474390 yeah i know... I'm already looking for one but it's hard to find someone i could trust.

So far I-N-T-E-R-E-S-T-I-N-G! :derpyderp2:

It was good! I liked it, maybe get a editor to help. ^^

7477167 thank you. And I know I need an editor badly :twilightblush:

7482844 Thanks m8 :twilightblush: next part is gonna be up tomorrow morning

7485720 ending a chapter with a cliffhanger... i'm so mean to you guys:twilightblush:
(next chapter is almost done.)

LOl,that was a sweet chapter,:heart: they make a cute couple.:raritywink: if they ever tell eachother that is,:rainbowdetermined2: what will Thunderlane do now? :trixieshiftright:

Eeeeek! So cute :rainbowkiss:! Keep it up!:coolphoto:

7488694 thanks:twilightblush:... and btw Next chapter is gonna be up tommorrow

Eeeeee there so cute.:pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::heart: and uh oh Thunderlane was there.:pinkiegasp::rainbowderp: great chapter, keep it up, good work.:raritywink:

Bravo my good sir another great chapter!:twilightsmile:

Poor Soarin! :unsuresweetie: great chapter as always! Have fun! :twilightsmile:

7494189 thanks:twilightblush: i made a small extra chapter for tomorrow morning... next regular sized chapter will be up on monday

AWw i feel bad for soarin :pinkiesad2:

Great Chapter though:yay:

I liked this chapter! I can't wait till the next one! You're doing great, keep it up! :pinkiehappy::raritywink:

That was such a sweet chapter story.:twilightsmile::twilightsmile: i love these chapters.:heart::heart::rainbowkiss::scootangel::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss:

I sort of saw this happening.... but I was still surprised good job keeping me on my toes!


Also in this story Scootaloo and Dash seam to have a more daughter, mother relationship. Not that I'm complaining just something I noticed.

This chapter is good and all, but you have to fix some errors.

Applejack, Rainbow wipe off the makeup when Rarity is’t looking:twilightblush::rainbowlaugh::twilightblush::rainbowlaugh::twilightblush::rainbowlaugh:

I shound have said this in the last chapter but Thunderlane is a jerk in this story

*Dies of Cuteness... again* WHY CAN’T I STOP DYING FROM MY INNER FANGIRL ALSO DYING FROM SOARINDASH AND CHEESEPIE?!?!?

he is the Capitan of the 1st naval aviation squad called wardog

Ace Combat 5 Ex-Machina

I feel like Sorain's brother is Thunderlane:derpyderp1:

“Seven a clock three bogeys.” Lightning said while smiling.

Seven o’clock

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