Wonderbolts Have a show soon in ponyville but the streak twins want to have some good time with their best friend Soarin. At the same time Rarity, Applejack and Rainbow Dash are planning to have a girls night out. Will the to partys meet and how will the show end up. (TAKES PLACE RIGHT AFTER THE EPISODE A CANTERLOT WEDDING Season 2 Episode 25/26)
This story has a sequel called Rainbows and jealousy.
You need an editor.
7474390 yeah i know... I'm already looking for one but it's hard to find someone i could trust.
7474466 Try looking in this group.
7474602 Ok thanks m8 =)
Great story
So far I-N-T-E-R-E-S-T-I-N-G!
7476913 thank you
It was good! I liked it, maybe get a editor to help. ^^
7477167 thank you. And I know I need an editor badly
7482844 Thanks m8 next part is gonna be up tomorrow morning
Such suspense
7485720 ending a chapter with a cliffhanger... i'm so mean to you guys
(next chapter is almost done.)
Yay!
7485951 LOUDER
Lol
LOl,that was a sweet chapter, they make a cute couple. if they ever tell eachother that is, what will Thunderlane do now?
Eeeeek! So cute ! Keep it up!
7488694 thanks... and btw Next chapter is gonna be up tommorrow
7488714
Hooray!
Eeeeee there so cute. and uh oh Thunderlane was there. great chapter, keep it up, good work.
7489942 thanks
Bravo my good sir another great chapter!
7490691 thank you
Poor Soarin! great chapter as always! Have fun!
7494189 thanks i made a small extra chapter for tomorrow morning... next regular sized chapter will be up on monday
AWw i feel bad for soarin
Great Chapter though
7494583 thanks
Aww
Great Chapter
The bonding moment! Awwwweee!
I liked this chapter! I can't wait till the next one! You're doing great, keep it up!
That was such a sweet chapter story. i love these chapters.
7501975 thanks
7501596 thank you so much
WUT JUST HAPPENED?
I sort of saw this happening.... but I was still surprised good job keeping me on my toes!
Also in this story Scootaloo and Dash seam to have a more daughter, mother relationship. Not that I'm complaining just something I noticed.
This chapter is good and all, but you have to fix some errors.
Applejack, Rainbow wipe off the makeup when Rarity is’t looking
I shound have said this in the last chapter but Thunderlane is a jerk in this story
*Dies of Cuteness... again* WHY CAN’T I STOP DYING FROM MY INNER FANGIRL ALSO DYING FROM SOARINDASH AND CHEESEPIE?!?!?
Ace Combat 5 Ex-Machina
I feel like Sorain's brother is Thunderlane
Seven o’clock