• Published 8th Aug 2016
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Pip's Treasure Chest - Brony-wan-kenobi



Pip's life changes after sending out for a mail order bride as he finding out that his new wife is a bit too pround of her body.

Comments ( 19 )

Are we getting a sequel?

Great cliff hanger.

...the 'Prince Charming' bit is terrifying...

oooh, sounds like we have the anti-Succubus.

Well, that's surprising. I look forward to what comes next.

Y'know, it's nice to credit those who help you...

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Sorry, didn't mean to forget. Not feeling at my best right now

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That's okay. Just reminding you.

Aww... we don't even get a scene of Merry Day getting raped?:applecry::fluttercry::fluttershysad::pinkiesad2::raritycry::raritydespair:

8067418 Like the implications weren't enough? Sides, most of us probably wouldn't find it hot.

Interesting cliffhanger... Looking forward for thing's to come...
And getting kinda changeling(half-breed?) vibe from Charming (green magic, ending line), or just talented individual abusing hi's talent.

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Found this. Its a link to the original art for Succubus here

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Not so much that he started it, but rather because he converted the bar into it. But eh. Just complaining about morality in a clopfic, so its kind of a garbage point.

Some might think this to be a stupid idea to take such a short cut. Merry, however, saw things differently. It was Canterlot after all, the capital of Equestria. Out of all the cities, there’s held one of the lowest crime rates in the entire nation. The only times when it wasn’t safe to walk the streets was when there was an invasion of some kind. So, for now at least, the streets were safe.

"Lowest" does not mean "non-existent" my dear :moustache:

Merry opened her mouth to say no, but the words wouldn’t come out. She just stared at him, never noticing the green mist like energy that was coming out of his hand and towards her eyes before they snaked their way into them. Nor did she see the green glow around his horn that matched his eyes.

Am i the only one wanting to scream "CHANGELING" :pinkiecrazy:

The stallion gave her a nod as he pulled her in close. “My name is Prince Charming,” replied the stallion as he looked into her eyes. “Now, let us be off to my home for some coffee.”

Ahh Prince Charming i remember reading about you... something that made you seem like a jerk :pinkiecrazy:

“Soon, I will get everything I deserve,” said Charming softly, his eyes fixed on the castle. “And that day will be perfect.”

Yes you will, but it will not be what you think you deserve :trixieshiftleft:

Anyway, this was nice, not a lot of big things happening but it was still a very nice story that made me smile :pinkiecrazy: much of the time.

And as always, i am looking forward to more :twilightsmile:

loved the summary, for starters. secondly, i think her name is a dead give away pip. just a thought xD

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You've only read the summary?

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Always read the summary first.

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