What if instead of waiting in Twilight's throne room like some cheap, one-dimensional villian, Starlight decided to play it smart? What if she decided to strike at Twilight when she off guard? And what if instead of sending her through time, she decided to do something abit more drastic to the princess of friendship?
An What-if story for The Cutie Remark that came to my mind when I saw this picture. This story main theme is brainwashing and hypnosis.
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Oh my, this looks nice.
Interesting...
I'll be watching this mate, don't let me down!
No pressure
This looks great dude! Can't wait at for the next chapter.
Just so to u know, its "to" not "too" in this case
Well this will get interesting! And will she win in the end? Or will Twilight stop her? I'm getting myself more and more hyped for this. *sighs and puts hoof to face* and I thought I had learned my lesson after Precious Blood.
Silly ponies, you can't have a nightmare if you never dream.
What happened to spike?
Nice startl
Great beginning! The conditioning should be fun to see.
I'm looking forward seeing where this goes.
Very nice. I want to see more.
7469544 Oh it will be alot of fun. Perceptions of reality maaay be altered. :)
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Any schedule for next update?
anymore?
Well any plan would be flaws I mean Celstia , Luna , Cadacne quite the power house. But still can't wait.
Wait why is one of my fic on the suggestions.. That alrerithum is odd
This being worked on?
Great start to the story! Very nice concept~
Can't wait to see more!
anymore?
Poke.
anymore?
I think spike should try to stop starlight but maybe does something to him abd when will there be more
more
When will there be more
Excuse me when this next chapter comes.
when is the next chapter coming? How many years has it been?
I don’t think that’s 100% true.
I don’t know if that’ll work.
I know I'm late and the story came first but this is awkward