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That was... Not that bad, actually.

Very steamy indeed.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Needs more neck fetishizing.

I loved this. Not just because I love vampire fiction for some reason, but also becuase there is an interesting thread in here regarding sincerity in the infected.


10/10

What do you mean, "how bad this was"? :rainbowlaugh: This was great! :twilightsmile:

This story is very steaming, a sweet tribute to the spirit of Carmilia, well done

What one and three said. There's a common thread of eroticism with vampirism, but it's all too easy to over do or just plain screw up. You did neither! The Patron Saint of RariTwi retains the crown.

I USED TO BE PURE AND INNOCENT ;;

eeeee no, not gonna believe that xDD

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7KSOk0hTSyI

Well I've stumbled upon a second account for Mono. I only knew you have this because you said you transferred a story over. Lucky for me this story got in the feature box. I guess I have to follow this one now as well.

This was a cute story. You picked a great picture to base this story around. Knowing how you end your stories I wasted too surprised at the ending to this one.

"Man that sounds like something MC would do if she wrote sexytimes, but it's the wrong author." *click* "Trivially Ghostwriter is Monochromatic's NSFW and discarded stories account."

Welp.

Eh, purity and innocent are overrated anyway.

Welcome to the trashcan. :derpytongue2:

Sneaky sexy Rarity is sneaky and sexy. :duck: Very well written! I liked that Twilight was never sure if it was the vampire influence or Rarity herself that engaged in debauchery, but couldn't help herself. I'm glad it all worked out in the end though!

I ain't gonna lie to you. This was great. Fluffy and cute, the exact amount of vampire and about the sex... There is erotica and there is smut. This was erotica. And, as a fellow writer of Carmilla-inspired stuff, Vampirarity is the best vampire.

Flutterbat was great, but Rares could give old Christopher Lee a run for his money.

Damn it. ..Now I want to write a crossover with Dracula. I can see it now, the countess Von Bell lures the young and naive solicitor Twilight Sparkle to her remote castle... all the locked Doors, the secluded Chambers. .. and "Oh, I'm afraid I don’t drink... wine... Darling."

This was a very enjoyable, and steamy read. Welcome to the NSFW crowd! :raritywink:

That was great

"100% Raritwi garbage"

Eh, you know what they say about one pony's trash...

This was good... though Twilight's thoughts about Rarity approached gilded lily status for me. Then again, I wouldn't expect a lighter touch from Twilight; she's not really one for halfway measures. Young love... so delightfully cloying... just means I won't need any sugar in my next coffee.

Have another upvote, and a nice day. :twilightsmile::raritywink:

Awesome fix good job. I think there should be more biting in fics. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Powerdrainer deleted Sep 1st, 2016

Lordy I forgot how s t e a m y this was

After Mono blogged about this account, I realized I never reviewed this. I'm actually one of those guys that doesn't like sex scenes in stories, especially when they get detailed. I get very uncomfortable; something I later realized was probably tied to my asexuality. However, this story is different. Something about the way it was written didn't set off my squeamishness (well, the blood sucking still did a bit, haha), likely due to the focus on Twilight's emotions and her connection with Rarity. And I enjoyed it a lot.

So there you have it, this author can write smut that's fun for the whole family!

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Honestly, I myself am not SUPER into explicit things unless they're like WRAPPED THREE TIMES OVER WITH EMOTIONS AND FEELINGS. It's probably the reason Crimson has been so light on the explicit content and why the only explicit thing we'll ever get in there, if we ever go explicit, will be only between Twi and Rares and focused heavily on THE FEELS.

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Looking forward to that, if it happens. Also, low key confirmed neither dies before they have sex 👀

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not if i kill her and then have Twilight tiME TRAVEL TO WHEN SHE WAS ALIVE

thats the twist sigma

twilight already lived through all of it and this is all her desperate attempt to save rarity somehow

ok no it isnt

or is it

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Please don't kill her.... .-. I don't know if my heart can take another night of crying over one of your stories and even now I can't stop the years from blurring my eyes

P.S.: I'm in public.

Wait, so do they get together or not?!?! I must know!

19 yr old's worst nightmare or not, I really enjoyed this! It was intense, and genuine, and felt like a very personal look into their more private feelings. I also thought it was, in some ways, very cute :raritystarry:

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