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Spike makes a new friend in the form of Kevin the Changeling. However, he is met with a lot of chagrin from the Crystal Empire. When Twilight caught wind of this, she too confronts Spike over him making friends with a Changeling.

Spoilers for Season 6, specifically "The Times, They Are A Changeling"

Trigger Warning: Arguments, hitting, Changelingphobia, political allegories on par with Angry Birds and Zootopia, and ponies being BTFO, also, rape by deception is mentioned

Spike's vector is done by Chrisgotjar

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 45 )

You know, this is possibly the first time I've seen someone make a fic about a episode before it actually aired.:pinkiegasp: About the fic itself, at first I thought you were just making a Twilight bashing fic and making her a complete control freak and a bigot as well, but when you had her explain her heartbreaking and/or heartwarming reasons, this fic managed to stun me twice.

Definitely do the Shining Armor chapter, he needs to hear what Twilight has to say. Also technically Sombra has been redeemed by now. In the comics his last major appearance so far ended with him being revived a 2nd time by all 4 princesses as they made sure he didn't fade way with the rest of the Umbrum. They all decided by his last actions, saving the Empire despite being the one to endanger it in the first place, that he deserved a pardon given all he's been through that led to him being a villain. The show writers apparently see it as canon to the show which is why Sombra won't appear anymore as it might mess things up otherwise.

This is pretty good. It show both sides of the issue and not just focus on one. I hope to see that next chapter you mentioned soon.

I want to read more about this issue.

Yeah, do the Shining Armor chap. He and his wife definitely need a serious talking to in this fic's universe.

“… Thank you, Starlight.” He walked towards Starlight’s bed and laid down in it.

“No problem, Spike…” She smiled and left as well, giving Spike a well deserved rest.

"Also, sorry for calling you a douche," said Spike.

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To be fair, he was calling Trixie the douche.

I definitely want to see a chapter with Twilight ripping her BBBFF (and here sister-in-law) a new one over what happened to Spike while he was there.

Make it so.

Pwease?

Kinda feels like ya NEED to write that next part. It's like, why mention it if there wont be any details or consequences from it? Would be a grand thing to see that part. I like cause and effect stories like this, puts a neat life like spin on the characters. Cheers to ya! :pinkiehappy:

Most of the time, Shining Armor is okay. This time, though, he needs a stern "Reason You Suck" speech and a punch. Please write another chapter, 'cause I want to see him get his comeuppance.

I dont know what BTFO is but I want Shiny and Cadance to gets whats coming to them

Great story! I, for one, really want to see another chapter, starring Twilight vs Shining Armor, Cadence, and the Crystal ponies.

You know what your problem is, Twilight? You talk a big game about forgiveness and friendship, but when push comes to shove, you start acting like anyone who’s not even a little nice is your enemy!


This is sadly one of Twiliy's major flaws. She really have a lot to learn about being the princess of friendship.

Interesting idea in and of itself, but everyone is just so out of character that it doesn't really come together.

Also, the trigger warning makes it look silly and tumblr-ish.

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"Blown the F Out." Basically it would mean that Twilight would give Shining and Cadance a stern calling out.

7460079 That's unfortunately the reason I can't upvote it. I also have a hard time believing that the crystal ponies who worship Spike would beat him up over this. Shock and confusion yeah but outright trying to kill him?

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Considering they were in timeout for a thousand years and changelings were apparently all but unknown until the wedding thing, they really have no business even knowing about them, nevermind feeling so strongly about them... but that's the kind of thing you can handwave for the sake of a story. That they'd be willing to do that, that Twilight would be willing to do that, and that no one, not even Cadence and Shining Armor, are willing to do anything about it is a much bigger problem. That's just heavy-handed tearjerking for its own sake.

Yeah, I'd read the Shining Armor chapter.

I feel for Twilight, I do. She lives a dangerous life and that puts Spike at risk.

Honestly, I don't know what to think of this universe's Shining Armor. On on hand, I can understand his reasons, but on the other... Either way, this chapter definitely reflects real life with the Changeling's being easily compariable to the Muslims fleeing from a certain terrorist group.

We need moar, good sir.

Starlight thought of all the apocalypses she caused, but not once did she actually think about how she might have caused Spike from never being born.

and just like that the wasteland timeline makes more sense

What about the ones who attacked Spike and the chnagling are they going tog et away with it. a example must be sent, imprsioned or exiled for attacking Spike Twilight's son and a refugee!:twilightangry2:

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You better be! I say another ep is in order were magic missiles are rained from above!

yes please make a chapter where he gets punished

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This was written before the episode aired.

Cadance got up. She knew just from the way she breathed that she was just angry. However, she just spoke one word that worked a thousand times faster than any spell she could have casted.

What was the one word?

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In her case, it would be "What", literally the line after the description.

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It's basically "WUT ARE HANDS!?"

Very poor choice of words

This is how I envision Kevin talking to Twilight.
You wanna know how I got these scars? Those guards are not ponies. They're fiends.
They take us out and go off, laughing, "Why so serious?" They come at us with knives and stick them in us, red and green blood oozing everywhere. "Why so serious?" They scrawl it all over the statue. Then...why so serious?

“When Tirek destroyed the library… I couldn’t find you inside… I thought… I thought you…”

Spike's a dragon, right? Wouldn't he be immune to fire? Why didn't Twilight think of this?

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There's a difference between taking a dip into lava and being blown up.

Am i allowed to remake this lmfa-

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Alright! I could use some details from you! Do you have discord?

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