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falconstrings
honesty is the best policy, and one man's opinion is another man's fact.
falconstrings
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Ugh
9187904
what?
Why people hate this so much I read worst story thin this
9191939
i don't know, haters gonna hate i suppose
Hey, dude, not to be mean or anything, but you have a ton of run on sentences and forget to creat a new paragraph when someone else is talking.
Little tip, describe everything down to the last detail. It will add to the content and made the story a hell of a lot longer. Another tip for editing, you can listen to the chapter while editing the story. It took me a year to figure that out.
9203298
hey thanks for the advice, I know I'm not a great writer so things like this are really appreciated. again thank you and I hope you've enjoyed the story so far
9203859
Yah, I know that there are people out there that will hate other stories for some minor, easy to fix things. Hell, my first story had to be completely taken down, rewritten, and heavily edited due to how many inconsistencies there were in it. This just needs a few minor changes like like I mentioned.
P.S. the tip on the listening to the chapter while you edit works on phone, but I’m not sure if it works on computer.
9187976
Then perhaps you should look else where, boyo? Fimfiction ain't a placefor toxic people like you.
Red path
blue path
and this is a sub comment for the red path: the gender dislike for female and like for male.
9228648
If you do red path can you make him either one of discords race or a alicorn of chaos you know make it funny
9229603
true, but that's not the plan with the speices change
9229979
Well can he atleast stay male
9230721
i guess but the spell said there's a chance that he won't...do with that as you will
so far the only vote has been the red path with no vote on the gender...i'll give this until the end of this week then I'm working on the next chapter
Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?
God i hope he stays male i dont like reading female stories
9254589
Up to you really.
9254701
ok in order, I Know this story has problems but I'm doing my best to fix them. I only gave one explanation throughout this entire story...it has a random tag for a reason. Thanks? and yes I know I need an editor if you know someone let me know. and the deleted comments are there because they didn't fallow the one rule I placed on the comments.
9254704
you'll have to see
Just a rule of thumb, it's generally not a good idea to delete comments. It makes the story and yourself look bad at an initial glance to most folk.
9262407
not a question but okay. to that, I say that the things that were said would have given a negative impression in the first place I want my reader to look at the story with there own opinion's and not others unless that opinion is constructive and helpful enough to potentially make this story better in the future. with this, in mind, I'll take your advice and thank you for it. I hope you've enjoyed it at least.
9258621
well, this exposition dump has a small purpose in the future, i mainly did it now, so i didn't have to later. plus if you're on this site then you know the more important details not related to Falcon. sorry for the delay on this comment
9215998
Criticism and toxicity are not mutually exclusive. If a story is bad, calling it bad should motivate the author to get better, not rage against his readers.
9471769
I didn't rage at them, they didn't say why it was bad and they were also being super toxic with their opinions. I'll admit that I have said somethings that weren't necessary, however, I heavily believe in the phrase: treat others how you wish to be treated, so I treated them like they treated me... I regret it and I decide to let bygones be bygones and deleted the comments so that future readers could post their opinions...though I wish it was more constructive in nature.
Amazing
9524418
Really? how so? because i don't see it...
Dang... I don't know what to say other than that this was the most saddening thing I have read that I can remember.
9583368
well, jump aboard the feels train... unless you mean about the story ending abruptly then I'm sorry
So... Why is Roxas fighting Ichigo Kurosaki in the picture?
10147912
Shirou Emiya from fate/stay night, it's just to show where the powers come from.