• Member Since 23rd Mar, 2016
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The Bricklayer


Slow down, you're doing fine, you can't be everything you want to be, before your time... -Vienna, The Stranger: Billy Joel. (Any Pronouns)

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My name is Twilight Sparkle, I along with five other mares saved the world of Equestria from Nightmare Moon and brought her back to her true form of Princess Luna. But the doctors here, along even my parents and mentor, they tell me that's just delusions created by a very lonely mare. But they're wrong... Right?

Features nice King Sombra and light Sombra/Redheart romance.

Art property of caiajhoson so credit where it's due.

NOT inspired by the Metallica song of the same name.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

7684873 Not really, no. Can you send me the link?

Um, I don't usually leave comments; but I felt like I had to say something at least.
The story was interesting overall... well at least I said something?
Still, definitely deserves the up-vote I gave it.

However, I cannot see any reason why this is being down-voted so heavily... as a matter of fact, it downright confuses me as to just why it's being down-voted so much.

7687645 Maybe it's because how Twilight was in the story?

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Huh... I hadn't thought about that... maybe?
Still is a poor excuse for random down-votes though; if that is the case.

Um, that's just my opinion though...

I really liked the setup, especially Redheart and Sombra, but the ending was disappointingly soon and didn't feel like a resolution, just where you decided to stop typing. I wish there was more...

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