Come on Spike, not even a loogie you just hocked at her face!! you simply said go away, I take back (especially since chapter 15 was rewritten) what I said, ya haven't been anything but a Pussy in this story.
Stargazer, who miraculously survived Celestia’s assault
How the hell did that happen???
So, what's the condition of Pearly Haze (I think that's his name)? Did Granny Smith ever get to those dragons? PLEASE tell me that Amethyst at least LOOKED like she was in a fight. Is there going to be a sequel where Spike does find love (or love finds him)? Or does he already have that with Twilight?
I'm glad Spike do not except Amethyst apology. Spike did not deserve to be treated like that. Quick note was this a Team Four Star reference
. “Who’re you?” asked Applebloom. “Name’s Dark Forest.” he answered. “Me and 300 of these here good ol’ boys are gonna have ourselves a little chat with dem dragons.” The Apple Family looked up and saw 300 angry crystal ponies just waiting to storm into the hospital.
7932265 Shinji Ikari was a pussy but guess what? He WAS A FUCKING MURDER MACHINE OF BADASSNESS!!! Just because someone chooses to be a pacifist does not mean they are weak, that's a reason why people didn't fuck with Albert Einstein. He not hit you but he'll make sure you die, your family dies, your towns dies, all plants around you die, and no one can even go where you use to be without slowly geting radiation poisoning.
Aswome chapter and I'm glad u didn't have Spike forgive Amethyst, bitch doesn't deserve it after what she did to him. Also looking forward of what kind of punishment Goliath and his goons are getting.
7932265 But it's better this way...he's being the bigger dragon...in a way, he's rejecting to hear her out....dashing away any chances of Goliath getting a lighter punishment. In other words, spike is telling her that if she didn't want Goliath getting in any trouble...She should have never have fucked him over...and did your forget about the black week chapters fending off LEGIONS of Mares in the heat with only a broom and still in crutches...that takes some serious guts and determination.
I tad short but alot seems to be going on. You know with the crystal ponies showing up im surprised there wasnt a set group to help spike get/feel better (take that how you will) her and back when he got hurt in the begining.
I'm probably going to be alone in this, but to me, this chapter was one of the best. Especially when Spike showed his good heart and asked for a milder sentence for Stargazer. A drastic change from the now-defunct chapter from before, but a good one.
7934255 but their dragons I wouldn't put it past them to have a rage mode desperation and anger are known to increase strength even here in the real world
7934449 Thing is, it was neither foreshadowed, nor is a character going "Who's your daddy, bitch?!" a berserker driven by fear and anger. He's a cocky ass on a powertrip.
7935430 I can think of ways to fix that with just adding a myth or legend about beserker dragons and taking out the daddy bitch line but it's already been rewritten so it doesn't really matter now
"300 angry crystal ponies just waiting to storm into the hospital. Some of them were even wearing white robes for some reason" FAUSTDAMNIT CADANCE! I burned almost a full tank of gas just to get here! And what am I gonna do with these hangman knots and my ball clipper?!
Something in me feels like Goliath and his goons will not be flying much longer, that's gonna be one of the punishments they receive. Amethyst is a major conspirator in this as well, so I have to wonder if her wings are in jeopardy too.
After all, one of their collective reasons that they repulse Spike is that he's a wingless dragon--a drake. It would be pretty approps if they lost their flight for what they did to Spike--and that would be a minimum in my eyes. I can't help but think that even though Spike doesn't have wings, there would be a way for him to fly anyway, probably similar to how Starlight levitates using her magic and flies with magic.
Looking forward to that, as long as Spike's future special somepony isn't a gold digger... (yeah, Rarity, I'm calling you out a little even though age was more of a factor of Sparity not happening at all in this piece). Of course when that happens, that female has to past muster by all of Spike's family...
....yeah, by this point, the Royal Family, The Mane 6, and Big Mac are pretty much his family; friendship just seems inaequate after everything the did with Spike almost dying--TWICE ..More like brothers and sisters. Sure Celestia is Mom, but some of them are sisters and brothers to Spike in all but blood, like Pinkie and Twilight, and Blueblood. The others are practically loving aunts and uncles.
No wonder the retaliation from chapter 14 was warrented. That wasn't just a band of brothers fighting a common enemy. That was a family coming together to protect the so-called baby of the crew. When the dragons messed with one, they messed with all of them.
Amazing story, absolutely flawless. I thought of some though so heres an idea that you might like: Spike has nightmares about it all and fears he's a monster or something! Horaaay!
But yeah, flawless. Absolutely brilliant. Might I be able mail you a seperate Spike story idea?
7998763 Nope. Rarity has someone already and the only thing I know of Ember is that she was introduced in a season 6 Spike episode. And after what happened to Spike in season 5 I no longer watch his episodes anymore.
7998824 That is both petty and unfair. Spike has gotten several decent episode s in season six. Hell Gauntlet of Fire and The Times are a Changeling are considered his best episode s to date.
8002534 The Crystal Empire treats him like a celebrity, he's now good friends with the newest Dragon Lord( and got to humiliate Garble), and befriended a nice Changeling and convinced an entire empire to accept him, technically setting up the events that would result in saving all of Equestria.
Come on, Amethyst. You showed no sign that you gave a single fuck until you got your ass handed to you.
Come on Spike, not even a loogie you just hocked at her face!! you simply said go away, I take back (especially since chapter 15 was rewritten) what I said, ya haven't been anything but a Pussy in this story.
YES COMMANDO GRANNY
How the hell did that happen???
So, what's the condition of Pearly Haze (I think that's his name)?
Did Granny Smith ever get to those dragons?
PLEASE tell me that Amethyst at least LOOKED like she was in a fight.
Is there going to be a sequel where Spike does find love (or love finds him)? Or does he already have that with Twilight?
Glad to see Spike throw Amethyst the fuck away, in a figurative way at least. Would love for it to be literal.
dat Granny Smith
Well at least that's over or is it?
HAH! Granny Smith, a one old mare Army. If ponies where smart, they'd get outta her way.
I'm glad Spike do not except Amethyst apology. Spike did not deserve to be treated like that.
Quick note was this a Team Four Star reference
Hellsing Ultimate Abridged
7932265 Shinji Ikari was a pussy but guess what? He WAS A FUCKING MURDER MACHINE OF BADASSNESS!!! Just because someone chooses to be a pacifist does not mean they are weak, that's a reason why people didn't fuck with Albert Einstein. He not hit you but he'll make sure you die, your family dies, your towns dies, all plants around you die, and no one can even go where you use to be without slowly geting radiation poisoning.
Aswome chapter and I'm glad u didn't have Spike forgive Amethyst, bitch doesn't deserve it after what she did to him. Also looking forward of what kind of punishment Goliath and his goons are getting.
Man i feel sorry for my boy spike!
MAH BOI SPIKE! Way put Amethyst in her place...Probably the reason for her arrival was to negotiate leniency on Goliath...FAT CHANCE!!!
Please tell me there's like a Dragon council who hear about what happened and are now pissed with Atomsk and want him to step down.
7932265
But it's better this way...he's being the bigger dragon...in a way, he's rejecting to hear her out....dashing away any chances of Goliath getting a lighter punishment. In other words, spike is telling her that if she didn't want Goliath getting in any trouble...She should have never have fucked him over...and did your forget about the black week chapters fending off LEGIONS of Mares in the heat with only a broom and still in crutches...that takes some serious guts and determination.
7932408
That'll be answered in the next chapter
No
Dragon healing factor
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I tad short but alot seems to be going on. You know with the crystal ponies showing up im surprised there wasnt a set group to help spike get/feel better (take that how you will) her and back when he got hurt in the begining.
I'm probably going to be alone in this, but to me, this chapter was one of the best. Especially when Spike showed his good heart and asked for a milder sentence for Stargazer. A drastic change from the now-defunct chapter from before, but a good one.
7934255 but their dragons I wouldn't put it past them to have a rage mode desperation and anger are known to increase strength even here in the real world
7934449
Thing is, it was neither foreshadowed, nor is a character going "Who's your daddy, bitch?!" a berserker driven by fear and anger. He's a cocky ass on a powertrip.
7935430 I can think of ways to fix that with just adding a myth or legend about beserker dragons and taking out the daddy bitch line but it's already been rewritten so it doesn't really matter now
what? wheres spike's romance? where is his somepony.
7936471
sequal
"300 angry crystal ponies just waiting to storm into the hospital. Some of them were even wearing white robes for some reason"
FAUSTDAMNIT CADANCE! I burned almost a full tank of gas just to get here! And what am I gonna do with these hangman knots and my ball clipper?!
7932806
Something in me feels like Goliath and his goons will not be flying much longer, that's gonna be one of the punishments they receive. Amethyst is a major conspirator in this as well, so I have to wonder if her wings are in jeopardy too.
After all, one of their collective reasons that they repulse Spike is that he's a wingless dragon--a drake. It would be pretty approps if they lost their flight for what they did to Spike--and that would be a minimum in my eyes. I can't help but think that even though Spike doesn't have wings, there would be a way for him to fly anyway, probably similar to how Starlight levitates using her magic and flies with magic.
7939254 U know now u mention it if they do get their wings torn off it would be pretty fucking ironic.
7936502
Looking forward to that, as long as Spike's future special somepony isn't a gold digger... (yeah, Rarity, I'm calling you out a little even though age was more of a factor of Sparity not happening at all in this piece). Of course when that happens, that female has to past muster by all of Spike's family...
....yeah, by this point, the Royal Family, The Mane 6, and Big Mac are pretty much his family; friendship just seems inaequate after everything the did with Spike almost dying--TWICE ..More like brothers and sisters. Sure Celestia is Mom, but some of them are sisters and brothers to Spike in all but blood, like Pinkie and Twilight, and Blueblood. The others are practically loving aunts and uncles.
No wonder the retaliation from chapter 14 was warrented. That wasn't just a band of brothers fighting a common enemy. That was a family coming together to protect the so-called baby of the crew. When the dragons messed with one, they messed with all of them.
Amazing story, absolutely flawless. I thought of some though so heres an idea that you might like: Spike has nightmares about it all and fears he's a monster or something! Horaaay!
But yeah, flawless. Absolutely brilliant. Might I be able mail you a seperate Spike story idea?
Since this story is added to the SpikexEmberxRarity group, I have a feeling that that will end up coming to fruition.
7998700
I'm sorry what?
Your story was added to the shipping group RariEmberSpike. I assumed you had put it there, guess not.
7998763
Nope. Rarity has someone already and the only thing I know of Ember is that she was introduced in a season 6 Spike episode. And after what happened to Spike in season 5 I no longer watch his episodes anymore.
7998824
That is both petty and unfair. Spike has gotten several decent episode s in season six. Hell Gauntlet of Fire and The Times are a Changeling are considered his best episode s to date.
8002465
So after 6 years he finally gets treated right?
8002534
The Crystal Empire treats him like a celebrity, he's now good friends with the newest Dragon Lord( and got to humiliate Garble), and befriended a nice Changeling and convinced an entire empire to accept him, technically setting up the events that would result in saving all of Equestria.
Just watch his episodes.
When's the next chapter?
8029023
My goal is to have it out sometime this weekend.
Yo I had a dream today it was ch17 being release today but i woke up i couldnt read it
Since when does Granny Smith own a barrel shotgun?
8208330
She is a farmer. Since when didn't she own a shotgun?
7932536
I KNEW I WASN'T THE ONLY ONE WHO SAW THAT!!
I like that spike still hates her