Without any warning, the universe, and all who reside in it, will be destroyed.
Sunset Shimmer is one of the many who will die, and is also one of the many who tried to save it. However, in the aftermath of her failed, valiant attempt, she lies wounded and dying on a hard, cold floor, with no one to comfort her.
It's usually best to avoid using words that mean the same or similar things in the same sentence. Also, there were a few spelling/grammatical errors within that I spotted, but was too into the story to stop, scroll down here, paste, and correct. Sorry
7559091 Repetition and repeating is my friend.
7559171 *shoves creative writing notes in your face that are from Steven King* They aren't writers' friends, though.