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DOOT_Slayer


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When seven strange objects, known as the dragon balls come into existence, the main 6 gain access to a power nopony has ever witnessed before, but along with it comes an enemy stronger than even the royal sisters. They must train hard, and break through their limits, if they're to even stand a chance of victory against this immanent threat.


Alternate Universe after Season 4. Despite having a gore tag, it’s quite light but it is there.

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 7 )

Shadow: Great story, man. I love the way you mix all the Dragon Ball references into this. Could use a little editing on some parts, and the story feels a little rushed, but enjoyable nonetheless. Will be waiting for the next chapter, don't leave me hanging in this cliffhanger!

Comment posted by DOOT_Slayer deleted Dec 24th, 2017

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I read through it again and you're right; it is quite rushed, and I'm surprised I didn't notice all the errors. I'm rewriting all the chapters currently. Hopefully it'll be better. Thanks.

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so, the picture for this story looks like either a fusion or a more buff Rainbow Blitz. i gotta ask, are the Mane 6 stallions in this story or are they still mares?

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They are still female, but yeah the drawing does look quite masculine. It was just a more muscular Rainbow Dash. I'm redrawing it anyway so hopefully it turns out better.

Almost finished this story. Really enjoyed writing it, and all your responses were very helpful. May write a sequel, if i can figure it out. :twilightsmile:

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