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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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(This fic takes place in the same AU as Rainbow Dash v.s. The Toilet, and although it is highly recommended you read that first, it is not required for you to do so.)

They say friendship is one of the most magical things that can happen in a young pony's life, but just how far will some friends go to help each other? Scootaloo doesn't know, but she's going to find out. For there's something she wants to do very badly.

While attending a play date at Carousel Boutique with her good friends, Scootaloo asks them if they'll help her learn how to use the potty, despite her mother claiming she isn't ready. Only, when she says potty, she really means the big one known as "The Toilet".

Scootaloo's friends say yes, not quite anticipating just how difficult the task will be. After all, the toilet is pretty big. And Sweetie Belle's big sister, Rarity, is supposed to be watching them for the duration of the playdate. But that's not going to stop Scootaloo from trying anyway. After all, everypony learns how to use the toilet sooner or later, right? So what's so wrong with getting a head start?

(Contains diapers and cuteness. A belated birthday present for Matt11, who inspired the original idea for this story which can be found here. Proofread by Smitty1038 on Deviant Art and proofread and edited by deadpansnarker on Fimfiction.)

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The story was ok but it really was difficult to understand I understand using baby words but my god just about everything they said was mispelled

I loved it!:scootangel::heart:

7470729 I'm glad you did. Did you enjoy the little twist at the end?

D'aww. What a fun story about working together to achieve a major milestone. Scoots' resolve to succeed was very impressive along with how each of the other foals played their own role in ensuring she succeeded. Definitely something that could be very believed.

This is also the first story I read where Scoots had a genuine mother. Dizzy twister sounds like a great name for her mom. I also like how this universe has potential for Scoots to fly. Very well done.

The dyanamic between Diamond tiara and Silver spoon is also far more positive than the show got itself into. This alternative way of all the characters knowing each other was really nice. The characters retained their personalities but had enough little variances to allow the belief they could be pals if some life situations were different.

A most enjoyable read.

8101761 Well if you liked that, you should check out the other fic to take place in this AU "Rainbow Dash v.s. The Toilet".

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