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I'm just a storyteller who sometimes writes about ponies, too. English isn't my native language, but I'm trying my best =)

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Princess Cadence seemed to be the only one pony at the Canterlot Wedding who knew who changelings and their Queen really were. But why, I wondered. What if Princess Cadence and Queen Chrysalis knew each other as fillies?
Cover Image belongs to me, too.

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Loved the way you wrote this!
There was a nice feel to it I couldn't really identify

7446477
Thank you very much for the first comment I've received here on fimfiction))

7447543
Huh)

7540131 Oh, that was for how shocked at how well this story did, and how Chrysalis believed that Cadence hated being her friend, though it really wasn't.

FYI: I think it was Celestia who impersonated Cadence to break Chrysalis. :trollestia:

I liked it. There is the grammar problem of being translated from another language but it is still a good read.

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Oh, now it's clear :D

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Thank you very much :) I used online grammar correctors to find errors, but I feel that's not enough... A proof-reader cannot be replaced by computers :twilightblush:

I like it!

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Thank you so much :)

This was really good! A little awkward maybe because of being translated from another language, but I understood well enough it didn't take much from the story. Well done!

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