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Fluttershy has a famous dad, a celebrated former member of the Wonderbolts, admiral Crossfire. Day for Day she tries to be a worthy daughter and now, soon after her 16th birthday, it was time to face the truth.
Thanks to Aider5 and xray13245 for helping with grammar check and spelling.
Thanks also to sevenofeleven for helping with the description.
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you might want to get someone to check out the story description as well.
were needs to be where
charakters needs to be characters
theyre needs to be their
its needs to be either it's or is
hole needs to be whole
fluttershy needs to be Fluttershy
take out the second l in beautiful
proof needs to be prove
isnd needs to be isn't.
None of this is to hurt you, but to help.
Looks like Aider5 didn't do good job. There are a lot of punctuation errors as well. Get another editor and try again.
Thank you very much Darth Redbeard, help is allways welcome :)
To be honest i wanted to do check the description later but simply forget the whole thing... yes, i know, shame on me.
Please dont blame Aider5, he did this to do me a favour, i made the mistakes in the first place.
I hope the next chapters will have not so much errors... at least i try my best.
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like this? Thank you sir :)
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Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?
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i dont know, if you find the answere about that question, please tell us :)
I'm still reading your story. ?
Sorry for the "?"; pressed the wrong key.
i am enjoy ing you story very much !!!!!!
thank you guys,
its nice to know that somepony likes this :)
otherwise i had to write it just for me :D
Oh my god. Dude, spelling mistakes. Spelling mistakes everywhere!!!
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I use multiple Softwares and let other bronys read it... but maybe they are some spelling mistakes i cant see?
And also:
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but i will work on it, i try get better from chapter to chapter and do it over and over again.
I am sorry if this makes the story hard to read/understand-
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Only a little.
why are you revoking the story?
i think this story is very good
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it's all about grammar and spelling. ^^
I had to change a lot with the help of other bronies and software.
The Story is still the same, but the readability should be far better
And by the way, thanks for the compliment ;)