A doll sits in a room, this is how it came to be.
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Wouldn't seat her sound better?
Oh, well. It was a nice little piece, I liked the atmosphere it had, even if I was left somewhat confused by the identity of the one holding the doll.
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GAH! Zaid commented on my story!
Okay, fancolt moment passing...
I appreciate the comment... and I wanted to keep the doll's holder vague. So it could have been anyone in the town from a lowly mule to Diamond Tiara...
I'll fix that line, though.
oh... That WAS SO GOOD!
Why does this story have a dark tag?
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Because it's not a happy story.
The doll's owner was an OC.
Or a depressed Brony.
You know, I was looking for a very short story to comment on as I'm very sick and feel light-headed, so when I saw this on my read later bookshelf, I was happy.
Now that I've read it…
I'm not sure how to describe how I feel. I'm not happy, but I'm not… upset. I don't even feel indifferent.
This story feels like the start to what could be an eerie psychological thriller—or something I'd expect to see James Wan’s name attached to (then again, I always think of him when I see a doll).
I'll give you a lot of credit for creating an eerie atmosphere and an intriguing story in less than 1,000 words, but I can't help but wish it was longer. It's definitely something that feels incomplete.
Ah well, whatever. Take a like and favorite.
Also, I'll give this a B. It's good for what it is. :)
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Htm.
Never thought of expanding on this...
I'll mull it over and write a couple drafts, to see how it feels.
Thanks for the idea!
:)
8434898 I feel like it'd make for an interesting. Like, whoever, has this doll clearly has some sort of obsession.
Perhaps Twilight can be confronted with the question: when does friendship go too far?
Because if I read one part right, the owner of the doll broke into Twilight's castle...
Clearly, there's something wrong with the owner, and I think it'd make for a cool internal conflict with Twilight!
That and I wanna see if the doll will come alive
no reason, I just wanna see if you'll go that far. :P
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Ohhhhh you don't even know how far I've gone.
Lol
I'll give it a shot, thanks for the ideas!
8434949 Weeeell...
I can guarantee I've gone farther!
And you're welcome! I'll be sure to check out the story (or chapters) whenever/if it comes out! ^_^
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I'll take that challenge!
8434986 fite me irl m8 ill rek u