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“You use a glass mirror to see your face; you use works of art to see your soul.” George Bernard Shaw

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When the HMS Equestria sets out on her maiden voyage, they're doing nothing more than charting nebulae is search for different forms of life. Officially, that's all they're doing. But, behind sealed doors in a dark room, select crew members are part of a clandestine investigation of a growing faction within the Federation.

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Hey, congrats on finally getting this posted!:twilightsmile: I'd read it, but right now I have so many other stories on my to do list I don't want to add any more right now. Just one question, will Q be in this story at some point?

7452962 It's neither confirmed nor denied that Q will make an appearance. :raritywink:

Not to mention even if they were 'docile' as perceived the only area they would be barred from is the command line and security. There gona need engineers, medics, scientists...

You know for a bunch of peace loving hippies, the federation sure gets into a lot of fights.

7453427 And does some pretty dark shit. Anyone remember some of the stuff in Deep Space Nine?

7453436 DS9 is my favorite because it goes there.

7453436 Sisko allows Garek to kill a Romulan Senator and criminal to bring the Romulans into the Dominion War

7453427 They have a lot of nerd rage. :rainbowlaugh:

taking on an Equestrian attachment

I imagine this should be "attaché". :twilightsmile:

I desperately hope that Twilight has styled her eyebrows to look Vulcan. :rainbowlaugh: :facehoof:

I'm curious, the Federation uses the 'U,S,S,' prefix for all it's vessels, albeit why all Starfleet ships are referred to as "the U.S.S. (blank)".

So why does the ship in this story have an 'H.M.S.' prefix?

Eh.

7543030 U.S.S. means United States Ship which doesn't really make sense in Star Trek, but it's a mistake that the franchise just rolled with. H.M.S. is used in the U.K. for Her Majesty's Ship. I'm using it since the ship is called the Equestria, Star Fleet gave it the HMS in honor of Celestia.

7543861 Actually the USS in Star Trek stands for United Star Ship

7544517 Indeed it does. Now I'm wondering where I got that other piece of information. Now I feel like an idiot. :applecry: But HMS still works. The first pony ship, why not make it Celestia's?

Shouldn't it be FITREP instead of FIRREP?

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Actually I believe it's stated several times to mean 'United Starship', in TOS and at least once in DS9. Also, sorry for the, err... Late... Reply, I didn't see your reply until I came back to reread these first few chapters.

Eh.

7543030 While this is a bit late, I'd assume it is due to its crew. All equestrian. And who is their leader? Celestia and Luna. Royalty.

why has this just stopped it was really well done and it should continue. Will there be more or is this story dead

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“Applehack here.”

Doesn't look like a cyberpunk AU, so I'm guessing a typo.

Seriously, you spend an entire chapter for this?
and only two paragraphs, saying next to nothing.
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picture a reasonably good Unicorn putting up a shiled?
7454315
Yeah, they do; some in particular ..

CPO: Chief Petty Officer

hmm, the CP3O ^^
sworry for the out of universe refference here, but it just struck as hilarious if you read it just right.
on a related note, why is this a separate chapter, here and now?
could this not have been moved up to the first chapter, so we knew this before the story got going?

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this startted out so well, :twilightsmile: and then it just fizzles out into a cloud of Space Dust .. :facehoof:

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