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DrakeyC


Writer, reviewer, creator of Filly Fantasy VI, occasional PMV maker, and uploader of mildly amusing image macros to Derpibooru. https://www.patreon.com/drakeyc

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RariJack denied?

BEST THING IN MY LIFE!
I'm sorry, but I'm a "Applejack is straight and innocent" supporter since I'm biased to her :pinkiesmile:

Herdick

Who is this guy? Is he son of Mr Typo?

Even in her most fantastical fantasies, the idea of a threesome with them had seemed impossible even in her mind.

I don't like this phrase, is repetitive.

Beside that,:moustache: good job sir. I can say for sure that I enjoyed all your clops and the story was sublime:raritywink:.

7435701 Errors corrected. Thanks for pointing them out. :twilightsmile:

One thing you might consider is have a sequel that is sexy but not sexual. For instance, I wouldn't mind Pinkie's prodding questions for Sunset. If a dude I know suddenly sprouted a vag, I'd most certainly want to see that shit even if we didn't do the horizontal dance. Even if he sprouted a second dick, I want to see that shit if only to see if he can do a dual helicopter meat spin.

As it is, I like it. It's cute seeing Sunset's friends with benefits relationship, although I do wonder how Trixie fits into their relationship. Not smart for RD to take it up the ass without any lube (seriously, that shit hurts), but overall an enjoyable piece.

7436210 The entire cafeteria scene sprang up from that idea. I wanted to address the obvious question of if Sci-Twi was affected the same way, and to have Sunset talk to the group and admit the truth. The kicker to this finale was the idea of Rainbow getting the portal magic, which allowed those two separate plot elements to be brought together in a natural progression.

Thanks for reading and for commenting. :twilightsmile:

Why is Sunset so surprised that she and Rainbow are the only lesbians in the group? How many did she expect?

(Quite an enjoyable story, though. I wouldn't have minded reading more, but it does seem like a good ending point.)

7437419 Hell if we know. Maybe lesbians are more common in equestria or something :rainbowhuh:

And Drakey, hve you considered writing fluff life stuff on RainSet? What about Twilight trying to get together with her dash? That begs to be written (even if done to exaustion already). Btw, loved the tetralogy. Even if there's no more smut to be had from you, gonna follow you now :twilightsmile:

7441076 I may turn out some non-clop stories in this universe. Never say never, of course. Thanks for reading and for the follow. :twilightsmile:

"Sci-Twi looked at Sunset for a moment, then back at Princess Twilight. “Sunset tells me you needed my magic absorption device to examine the feasibility of removing her new genitalia?”

The other seven girls seated at the table instantly froze."

I just lost it here! :rainbowlaugh:

I would just like to say that this is the only thing I can associate https://xkcd.com/1615/ with now.
imgs.xkcd.com/comics/red_car.png

it's a shame to see this series ending, but it's certainly better than continuing it if you have no interest/intent to make more.

Other than that: nicely done, I really enjoyed this story. I don't see SunDash (or SunDashLight) very often in clop or other stories, so thanks for givin me a new ship to enjoy.

i knew when I saw that pic I commissioned as the cover photo, this was going to be a good time.

Was not disappointed.

7584270 :raritywink: Hope you don't mind me using it, was the most fitting pic of the three I could find for this.

No more clop fics from you after this one? Nooooo, despair and anguish.

7693511 need a double team on twi... that = awsome

You should add a comedy tag to this. Sci-Twi's total lack of interest and tact is hilarious. :pinkiehappy:

“The music room?” Applejack got a disgusted look on her face. “As in the music room where we practice every week?”
Twilight blushed furiously. “Um… on the desk.”
“The desk? Ah eat offa that!” Applejack jumped to her feet and ran off, gagging.

I can't remember the last time I laughed that hard. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

So yeah, color me interested in any potential future stories that have this dash/sunset characterization/relationship. I feel like it has the potential for some really fun, sweet, and awesome stories. I get that you're done with clop, and that's not what I'm saying I guess. I just really want to know more about those two and their life as a couple. :3

Just because she is socially awkward doesn't make Sci-Twi into Sheldon Cooper.

This was awesome!

Now we need a squeal where rainbow and Sunset spit-roast Trixie.

I like how you kept this series short.

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