A depressed pony (Miss Eri) goes to the hospital, and meets a nurse (Arrhythmia) who tries to help her out.
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A depressed pony (Miss Eri) goes to the hospital, and meets a nurse (Arrhythmia) who tries to help her out.
I very much enjoyed this story. It was very well written and flowed very well. This is always a difficult subject to write, even if you have experienced it yourself or through friends or family. I think you did it a great justice with just the right amount of personal information on Eri. Mia was a very good character and your portrayal of her was just excellent. She is just the type of pony Eri needed right now. I hope you an continue this story.
Good luck and take care.