Infernallight
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So there wasn't any notice of this passing submission, yet it's here regardless... oh well.
MOAR!
Not bad at all my friend, though you could space out the paragraphs a bit to clean it up.
Other than that, good story. The grammar was right on, the plot kept me interested, and I'm kind of hoping for some sort of ALT end...please?
7434792 Thank you very much! Yes, when I typed in Microsoft Word, the spacing was fine but when I paste it onto the website, it gets strange. Also, I was eager to get this out and I kind of rushed. I hope that I'll be able to continue...
Again, thank you for the comments :)
7434780 drowning out the good stories...
*cough cough most of the stories I've made cough*
7434792 I've already began the second part... Now I believe me and countless others expect something from you soon!
7434780 I actually thought this wouldn't work out because it isn't my main writing style, but I enjoyed it immensely and it turned out great. I'm probably going to write something involving Luna sometime soon
Do more! I'd love to see where this can go.
7960494 thanks! Sequel is in the works right now :)
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Woo!!!
hoping to have the new chapter up shortly.
Is there going to be more? And if so when?
Why no talk about storys that happened in 2014
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I was 12. I’m just going to leave it at that.
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Oh ok 👌
So I was wondering is Luna dead or what she banished again and why?
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You’ll have to wait and see ;)
Thank for reading!
Friendly word of advice, link to Zamariac's and SaiyanUltima's user pages. Please respond to this comment.
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Thanks!
Their is no justice in letting evil live.
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Without evil, there can’t be good in the world
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At the time, there were already too many tags to add that one. I'll be revising this shortly :)