This story is a sequel to The Pony That Fell From The Sky
Sweetie and Ash have seemed to put the past behind them! They are now both engaged and are waiting and preparing for their wedding. But when a familiar face comes back for revenge, who knows what will happen.
Sequel to The Pony That Fell From The Sky.
Special thanks to The Great Eater for being my sounded board, idea pony, editor, and all around helpful pony. And to Sudoku Brony who helped write this description and get me out of my writers block.
Chapters (32)
Instant fav!
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so glad that you approve!
this story is starting out good, but some how I think this is going to be a easy story line to get lost on / in I would suggest planning things out to keep on track.
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Thank you for the advice
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So glad you like it, I plan to update weekly as long as I can.
a good chapter
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This is the one I had in mind, but I like yours too
Needs separated.
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Thanks, fimfic majorly messed up when I imported
And sorry about those dislikes. This doesn't deserve that many.
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I just wish that people would comment saying what they don't like so I know what I'm doing wrong
The only thing that I can think of is that it might be moving on too quickly.
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Hum...honestly that never occurred to me.
7470083 I'm gonna start giving you sudoku puzzles at some point.
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Why? Because you can?
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7479405 Of course.
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7479405 maybe
hum this is getting interesting.
love is in the air.
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Yes, yes it is.
Chapter 6. I haven't read it yet, but my first thought when I read the title was my school's marching band; one ofthe Pep-Band songs we play pretty often is I Got You (I Feel Good).
Heh, it's a small world.
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amazing coincidence, though since I use song titles as titles of my chapters on purpose maybe not so amazing
well now this is totally different and I like it.
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I'm glad you like it
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Wow, didn't know there were that many
When I read your previous story the first time around, I was sad that there was a cliff hanger, and you hadn't started on this one yet. Hurray! There is finally more to this awesome trilogy of stories!
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I'm glad you are enjoying the stories, hope I don't disappoint
A futanari spell.
things went from 0 to 100 pretty fast
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Why you say that?
well this is a really good chapter.
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Thank you very much
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The Birthday Massacre song was the one I was thinking about.
yep the clues are here and I think I know ware this is going and it is going to be good.
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Too obvious?
well shit this is not going to end well.
AJ is going to be pissed after she calms down.
I am guessing this is going to lead to war.
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you think?
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I would say no remember my word count on the site is way over 15 mil and I love Mistry's so I can see / look at things a bit different I tend to see patterns.
but on a side not working with java helps to see patterns and the one little thing that just does not fit or stands out.
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yeah, I'm not exactly hiding my motives either.