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SonicRPika


In this world of chaos, one must either enjoy it, try to change it, or find peace with it. So why have I found solace in all three?

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NOTE: I will not be updating this as regularly as other stories because I'll only be writing this one as and when I get the ability to. I have other projects and things I need to do. Thank you for understanding.


Jack Psyciro is a boy who's ended up falling for the same thing everyone else who goes to Canterlot High falls for...getting a romantic partner. Sadly, that love wasn't to last, and Jack ended up losing his girlfriend in a way nobody expected. Now that he's in 11th grade, and he's had enough time to cool down, will he fall in love again, or will he end up forever alone?


Set in the Pie of My Eye (PoME) universe. I'd like to thank everyone who helped me (I've thanked you in the author's notes in the chapter it's relavent in)
All OCs belonge to their respective owners.
If you wish to use Jack Psychiro, Flamecaller, or Zap Cannon, then please PM me so that we can sort everything out.

Additional tags will be added as the story progresses, as some tags/characters that are in the story later don't show up at the start.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 33 )

Roden: Ah crazy kids

Shard: Oh boy, Spitfires turn now

Sapphire: Is it just me or are there a lot of people here that have something in common with fire?

Shard: Don't think about it too much

Well, this should certainly be interesting, everything looks good so far

A good start man. A really good start. Still I'm looking forward to whatever happens next Right... Oh ya... still on his list Trixie what about... Oh right on hers too... Um diamond waht about... no shes mad at me too... Trends and Coco... No that wont work either... Suri what do you think?
Suri: Wow had to call on me... that's rare... Anyways lets see how well he survives this universe.

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Flamecaller: I have no idea what you're on about there miss. Maybe a coincidence?

Jack: ...

7509271 err...what list?

Great chapter man! I can already tell this'll be good :pinkiecrazy:
Mise: spitfire huh? What color do you want the flowers at your funeral?
Octavia: *slaps mise* that was very uncalled for....you're sleeping on the couch tonight, I'm sorry jack, he doesn't know when to bite his tongue

7509315 mise: I rather be whipped than...err..nevermind, I'm not ready to die today...

7509321 Roden: You've lost all freedom Mise, I know what Octi is like, and trust me, you ain't got no say in anything anymore

7509324 mise: *shrugs* I knew exactly what I was getting into, and I am perfectly okay with that. She completes me and I complete her.

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Jack: *quite shy because of the many new faces* Mise, I think Mysti would sooner kill me...

7509547 mise: well even though I won't be seeing you for a long time, and at this point in the timeline I'm busy leading a guerrilla army with ruthless fury, so see you 2 to 3 years

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Jack: err...

you do realise that, due to the nature of the timelines, it could be both in 2-3 years and/or a few months.

7509594 octavia: he's crazy, but more harmless than dangerous.

I do, it's up to you if and when mise even appears in your story, i'll still be reading it regardless

7509594 i think if found a mistake
"what's the plans for Halloween at school. Even though it's over two months away?"
Remove the full stop at the end of school and add a comma.
Also, how often is this going to be updated?

7513525 Technichally you're both right and wrong. It's what Microsoft Word told me was good gramatically, although I agree a comma would work.

As for updates, it'll be as often as it comes. All depends on how often I can sit down, write, and just keep writing the chapter.

While it seems the resolution was a bit rushed, I see no problems with this chapter.

Ditzy: Word to the wise, do not play dodgeball if you are against Shard or Rainbow Dash...

Shard: Hey I said I was sorry, I didn't mean to hit you, it bounced off of Trebles face!

Roden: Hmmm, I should see about getting a few sessions with Jack...

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Jack: *at Ditzy and Shard, a bit shy* I know about Rainbow, and I'm usually out before then anyway. Shard on the other hand...

Jack: *at Roden, even shyer (if that's even a word)* what do you mean?

7524321 Roden: there may be more lasting mental issues that yoir previous councillor failed to see, so I'd like to schedule a few sessions with you at my therapy practice in Maretropolis

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Jack: Funny you should say that, because Mise recconmemded you to me. I'll have to give it a shot. (I was RPing with Celtic, very future event. But far enough that it shouldn't really be that bad of a spoiler.)

7524362 Roden: One of my clients is soon to be finished with his sessions, so I'll have room to fit you in, just ask either of my aunts to give you a card, it will have the number and address of my therapy practice

Light: Detention on the first day? Wow. At least you don't get dodgeballs and pencils thrown at you. But still try to control your temper alright? I know that might not be easy but just try alright i'll see you around.

Like Pyra the resolution came a bit fast but like him i also see no problems with this.
Light: Word of advice. If your new at a school don't play dodgeball you'll get signaled out pretty fast. Trust me had it happen to me twice wasn't fun. Also I don't think i've seen you around you new here?

7536718 Jack: That's actually the first time in a good while I've sparked like that, and the first time it happened that fast. I'm usually as cool as a cucumber

7536718 Jack: That's actually the first time in a good while I've sparked like that, and the first time it happened that fast. I'm usually as cool as a cucumber

7536751 Light: Even if you don't just try to keep calm in those situations alright?

7536720 Jack: *a bit fustrated* why does everyone think I'm new here? This is my fourth year going to CHS, we play dodgeball every session. I'm used to it!

7536791 Light: Hey nothing by it man i'm new here so i didn't know that i'm sorry.

Dark Red with blue hair huh? I take it you never really noticed how... Well, bad that combination is. They don't blend well at all, there's far too much contrast. Not only that, but it gives off the 'edgy character' vibe right off that bat, which isn't necessarily a good thing. Sure, a character with a 'bad boy' attitude from what I've gleaned through the comments could very well be a good thing, this is just odd. Character flaws are good, yes, because nobody likes a Mary Sue, but perhaps you should consult some others before settling on a character and their design.

May I suggest something more along the lines of a pastel color palette? Not so much a high contrast pseudo-neon?

7546051 Right...I'm not the best when it comes to apperance. Also, he isn't a "bad boy". At least, I don't plan on going down that route anyway. I also have a reason for everything happening.

7546116 any update? try not to leave this as 'incomplete' for like a month/year

7570105 It'll most likey stay "incomplete" for longer than a year, but that's the nature of writing. I have a life outside of this, one that has become a lot busier as I'm starting uni. So updates will be slow. Also, I find it hard to write what I think. So writing takes it's time.

If you look at the other stories in the PomE universe, you'll find that there are stories that are years old and are incomplete. I've read fanfics that have been left for months and are incomplete. Patience is all you need mate.

And just in case, I have ideas for chapter 3. They are in the works and should be written soon. :pinkiehappy:

7570130 well, maybe you should put this on hiatus then, people might think its done

7570139 *sighs* it's being worked on, and chapters are in the works, so it would be pointless putting it on hiatus. And I dought people would be stupid enough to think a story marked incompete with 2 chapters is complete, especially as not much has happened.

7570154 well, ive seen stories with 1 chapter marked as incomplete and it was published in like 2014

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