Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle wanted a break from the constant pressure of their daily life. After casting a spell supposed to help them, some unexpected changes happens, and they will need the help of their friends to get trough it!
**Warning: Regression and Diaper usage content.**
English isn't your first language? Well, if that's true, you should probably secure a proofreader that knows it well. Grammar can make or break your story.
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I may do this if needed; I know that Grammar is important, that's why I put this warning. For now, I already have a friend that helped with some of my recurring mistakes.
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I have been known to edit stories. If you like, I can act as your proofreader.
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Thank you for the offer. I might send you a message when my first chapter will be complete.
I started to read you're Bast's Adentures story, seem interesting! I will try to finish it tonight.
Nice.
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Ah, I haven't touched that story in months... I need to get back to it but I have another story I want to put out first. It is something I think you will find more interesting.
Oh Shit! Damn It Twilight!
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I'll make sure to take a look at that!
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I must say I really like your picture!
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Thank you m'good sir
Fairly strong start and I will be following. If need someone to look over your work I would be more than happy to assist.
For now here are some corrections that could be made:
I understand that your first language not English so this just might be a keyboard layout thing for your own language but using ‘’*phrase*" instead of "*phrase*" (doesn't really matter but threw me off a bit while reading).
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Wow, thanks a lots, it means a lot for me!
I will make those corrections.
Thank you again for your time!
Moar
More plz
I just started to work on the rest. Sorry for delay, had less time than I thought.
Why is the gender tags all male?