When two totally different pony's, Vinyl Scratch and Octavia Auditor, become room mates at Ponyville School Of Preforming Arts, what fiascoes will happen? you can learn all about Vinyl Scratches and Octavia Auditors Crazy adventures as they get through the four long years of school, at Ponyville School Of Preforming arts. will Octavia get her dream job? will Vinyl Scratch get her mixing skills on world wide? you will just have to read on to find out!
Author: NeonVibeBrony
Editor: FlowerGirl3765
Co-Editor: RussianTechnoFalcon
Chapters (7)
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Dear Readers,
I am trying my best to re-edit all the chapters and get them sent back to NeonVibeBrony. I should have them done very soon.
The Editor,
- FlowerGirl3765
Thanks To Our Editor Flower girl, Chapter 1 Has Ben Edited To Fit Correct Grammar! Chapter 2 Is On Its Way.
your getting better at overall typos i only spotted you write hand once and a few typos but you have great story writing
Much better. Cant wait till the next part comes out. Keep up the good Work!
Chapter 6 WIll Be Released When The Editor Finish's The Edit Of The Other Chapters
Sorry for the wait everybody! next chapter will be here soon!
Vat? Vat joo Say?
Things are going to get good!
Hey guys! Sorry for the lack of edited chapters but I was on a two-and-a-half wee vacation. So no editing was done.
I'm back now though. I should have the last three chapters finished within a couple hours. Yay! 
OH GOD!! IT'S THE GIANT WALL OF TEXT!!! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!
Edit: I'm the editor. For me this is my worst nightmare.
Hey Neon. In the future, Could you NOT do giant walls of text? It's kinda a bitch to edit. 
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:L You do realize that NeonVibe fired you, riiiight?
1377261 Wait . . . WHAT?!?!?!
RussianTechoFalcon, you are a gift from God. I tried my best with what was here but even then it still wasn't the greatest. Thank you so much for re-editing this.
I think its a great series so far, even though it has its error. Three moustaches
Tip: If you enjoy the making this series, please continue. Who knows it might get Feature some day.
Got to be brutally honest here. This story is horribly paced. The "boy, that escallated quickly" meme would be very appropriate about now. With all the major events that had taken place, it should be spread to at least 20,000 words.
The details were vague, and there was little character development. Vinyl and Octavia's meeting and opinions of each other should have taken a lot longer than it did. With personalities and styles that different there has to be at least some initial conflict. Meeting lyra with a robbery, though unorthodox, is a nice touch, but it is given so little back-story. If someone broke into a college dorm-room while the person (or pony in this case) who lives there is still in it to steal a musical instrument, ransacking the place in the process, there has to be some reason and more than just some emotional damage done to the victim.
I think the teacher were too fast to judge on whether or not Vinyl and Octavia deserved to be moved up. As far as i know from the fic, Octavia was just improvising the song that she was playing. Orchestras are vastly more complex. The players need to be able to read music, sight read when necessary and many other aspects of keeping in time with the orchestra together. Being able to come up with a good song on the fly takes skill, but to be in any orchestra, one has to audition infront of a panel of judges and play at least one prepared piece (given at least 2 weeks in advance to learn and practice) (usually a solo or an ensemble), and a sight reading session in which the musician(s) is given 8 mins to study over, make mental notes, and practice the song without actually producing a sound with the instrument (using a technique called shadow-bowing). (source: I was an orchestral student for 6 years)
As for vinyl's situation, if a student was late to class on the very first day, it would set a bad first impression. If that same student produced a radio-quality song in 30 mins (which is not completely unheard of, but is very unlikely), the teacher (regardless of how casual he is) would be more suspicious of her and ask her to write another one as he watched (she would have time if she was THAT good, most classes are 55 mins to an hour 20 mins long). Only after the prof witnesses her create the initial beat, work on fading, harmonizing parts, mixing, and countless more steps that go into making a song, would the prof be willing to move her up. And that is still jumping the gun a little bit. There are tons of sub-genres to electronic music. He would still have to see how she does in the other sub-genres.
When it came to Crowcut, you did a little better with character development, but you need to go further into his back-story.
For future extensions of this story, I would highly recommend going into the race horse trio's story. Why Greengun is like that, more details about why the other two ponies got with Greengun, and other such details
I would highly suggest going back through this and focusing on the details of the story.
Overall, the story's concept is very good, but the pacing and character development need a lot of work.
If you would like to hear my thoughts on what should of happened with the earlier chapters (i do have some ideas for them), feel free to send me a PM, I would be happy to help.
Also, I apologize for the wall of text.