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Original username Zoddtheimmortalone. I'm a fan of anime, but I enjoy the classics more. As for My Little Pony, I may not watch it as much, but I do like the show and I also love EG

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He kinda sounds like a pussy. But I'll give this a few more chapters ta see were it's going.

wow... This hit too close to home.

I'm liking it, nice grammar, realistic scenarios, and enough depression to effect the reader, although i just might be biased.

Mr. Mop and Mrs. Bucket :rainbowlaugh:

Treasure Planet?

7465617 ...Was that first sentence really necessary?

chrysallis is a bitch, both on fanfiction and in MLP

Probably not. Just thinking out loud here.

Eventually someone would notice

This guy's got it worse than Carrie White, if that's even possible

I feel like Babu is gonna be killed by Chrysalis

7465907 He does have a point, uncomfortable it may be.

Nice to see Eren's finally found some bit of happiness. I just hope it won't be ruined.

I'm liking the story so far, Haven't seen many good cadence romance stories so looking forward to this.

I have now made it my mission to find references in this story. (Reading)...:rainbowderp:

SO far, there's only one my mind can process. There's a Disney's Aladdin one in this chapter.
I think.

Do you like Disney??!!!

Huh this chappy was wwwaaayyyyy better than the first. Or maybe i'm just saying that because I hate rocky openings. Can't wait for more.

Of course I do. Who doesn't?

it's so great to see you making a new story zodd, im glad your still with us here in fimfiction and i like this story already. Canterlot high irl may be gone...but wondercolts forever and C.H.S. forever! /) :rainbowdetermined2:

Treasure planet reference!

Comment posted by Sunny Starscout deleted Aug 10th, 2016

No matter how much I try to avoid Chrysalis, I always end up coming across her and that's win the bullying happens.

I'm sure it's "When" Not Win Lol

The story itself my be a little wish-fullfill-y for me but I can see where he's coming from. While I'm not the kind of person to take bullshit like that lying down (anymore), it's hard to fight back, especially when the offending party is female. Anyway, good luck with the story, dude.

Well i'm glad are going better for Eren but there oen thing that still bugs me.
he could had a friend in Pinkie Pie but he rejected and treated her like crap, that wasn't fair of him she was trying to help him and he spat on her.
I udnerstand he was bitter and angry but jeeze.

i hope he apologizes to her.

I think the reference was unintentional I think you guys just watch tv to much

Ah young love. It's a grand thing.

Hope this story lasts a while!! I can see it going places! :pinkiehappy:

Bit bad, but feels a little rushed with how pinkie tried to help and Cadence seeming too atrative already, thoigh I'll give some suspension since she seems to have know Chysrslisis

Amazing keep it up no matter what anyone tells you . Because this story is amazing.


I can care less of what those people say. They disgust me and they should leave.

Thank you for being on my side

I can buy a bit more now with this paceing with Cadence depression... But yeah, I'm sure most of the time someone compliments a girl by saying she'd make a good housewife... X
Taking on pre-readers for this?

huh, this shit just gets better and better.

Oh man what a turn this turned out to be. Go Er- dog woof woof woof! This went from tracking to fave man. Also loved the video here. Can't wait for more.

I'm glad he apologized to Pinkie, short and simple but heart felt the best way to go.
I'm worried about Chrissy, she freaking nuts, he needs to report her in, could call the cops or so they can parol his house or watch his house as he comes home wills care her off for a bit.

"as for the father, he died in a car crash at the age of three."

Ummm... :unsuresweetie: What?

Also, I must have missed something in the series. Was there an episode where Cadance was specifically referred to as Celestia's niece, or is it just a fan theory? I've been part of the fandom for 3 years and I don't remember anything like that being mentioned.


She is Celestia's niece and thanks for spotting the error. Fixed it

I'm glad he grew a pair, now he just needs to get her locked up for life.

Just saying that I love your story, keep up the good work!

Buddy your amazing continue the story , it's superawsomeazing


I will. I'm just dealing with college and all that. Plus, I have another fanfic to work on that's on the other fanfic site.

Well... crap

*le gasp* so dramatic

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