I can buy a bit more now with this paceing with Cadence depression... But yeah, I'm sure most of the time someone compliments a girl by saying she'd make a good housewife... X
Taking on pre-readers for this?

huh, this shit just gets better and better.

Oh man what a turn this turned out to be. Go Er- dog woof woof woof! This went from tracking to fave man. Also loved the video here. Can't wait for more.

I'm glad he apologized to Pinkie, short and simple but heart felt the best way to go.
I'm worried about Chrissy, she freaking nuts, he needs to report her in, could call the cops or so they can parol his house or watch his house as he comes home wills care her off for a bit.

"as for the father, he died in a car crash at the age of three."

Ummm... What?

Also, I must have missed something in the series. Was there an episode where Cadance was specifically referred to as Celestia's niece, or is it just a fan theory? I've been part of the fandom for 3 years and I don't remember anything like that being mentioned.

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She is Celestia's niece and thanks for spotting the error. Fixed it

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I'm glad he grew a pair, now he just needs to get her locked up for life.

Just saying that I love your story, keep up the good work!

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Buddy your amazing continue the story , it's superawsomeazing

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I will. I'm just dealing with college and all that. Plus, I have another fanfic to work on that's on the other fanfic site.

How stupid is Chrysalis? I would've made the call anyways because they probably try and track down the guy who's getting stabbed over the phone. Depending upon the area, cops can be there quicker than you think. So go ahead. Stab me with your knife so a cop can tase you with his Taser.