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Lunatone


We can never foresee the true future, but what is certain is that our story and fate will end in a dystopia.

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Princess Luna reminisces a mysterious dream she has been having for years and recollects the importance of it.

Suffice to say, not all answers in life are easy to come by, even when one is immensely powerful.


Editors:
ChappedPenguinLips and NorrisThePony

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 11 )

7421247

Tank cue ^^.

I wanted to write something with Luna, because, you know, Luna is best princess.

~Lunatone

This was wonderful, L! Not a word was wasted, and there is so much that was said. I am curious to see where this goes, if anywhere!

this is great! ^^

7421671

Hey thanks. I'm glad you liked it!

~Lunatone

Mild typo here,

No pony’s has had a nightmare all night, it seems, which is a first;

No pony has has had a nightmare? Pony is has? Was has?

"No pony's had a nightmare" or "No pony has had a nightmare", unless there's a bit of grammar I'm overlooking (which is entirely possible :| Much as spelling is my love, grammar has always been hard for me.)

Edit because I'm a dunce:
This isn't to say it isn't good writing - it definitely is, damn cliffhangers.

7421935

Oh, thank you. I don't know how I missed that :twilightblush:

Appreciate it.

~Lunatone

7421626

Thank you. This story wouldn't have been the way it is without my wonderful helpers!

~Lunatone

7427294
You are most welcome! Please pass my compliments along to them as well. :twilightsmile:

This has been an interesting read, sending shivers down my spine while reading it. I think it may have benefitted from some parts lasting a little longer to enhance the atmosphere and thoughtful moments a bit more, but what you have here is sufficient.

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