When Applejack tells Winona to keep an eye on Applebloom for the day, Winona expects to have a day with back to back belly rubs and games of fetch.
The Everfree was never in the equation.
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Shadows cannot exist with light. Where there is light, shadows spawn. There must be balance. And that burden belongs to me...
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Aside from a few spelling mistakes (Like typing Diamond Tiara's name incorrectly at least twice in two totally different ways) this was a fun read, and so earns a like and a favourite.
I wouldn't worry too much about Timberwolves though, Winona. From what I've seen of them on the show, they're total wusses.
An unfortunate fact is that Winona is actually the least favorite of all of the mane 6's pets, almost certainly because she shows the least personality. It was enjoyable, but didn't particularly stand out. I would have liked to have seen more of your idea of what her personality is actually like, as opposed to just showing her acting like a dog.
Seeing pets spending quality time with kids are the things we need to remind that pets are part of the family.
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Nasty little typos. Not even Microsoft Word can stop their invasion. Time for some extermination!
And yeah, Timberwolves tend to be all bark and no bite.
...I'll see myself out.
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To bad they didn't give every pet a monologue. That'd make this series a lot easier.
To be fair, dogs actually do have a range of character. Some are agressive, some are motherly, and some sleep like cats. Winona seems to fit that niche of dogs who abound with energy, work hard, and tend to be easily distracted. That's what I could find, so that what I used.
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The only pets I've had are fish and chickens. They tend to be a part of the family to the very end.
...Yeah that was bad, even for me