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This a form of therapy for you?
Damnnnnn
I may catch flak for this, but Fluttershy should catch him.
Christ, Regi.
Wow. I don't know what to say, honestly. I mean, it's really good, but Jesus Christ.
I, uh... liked the song references?
This was intense, and good for what it was. Well constructed. The pacing of the end was sudden, the realization reached perhaps a bit too swiftly, but overall a good piece.
7422078 it was a long time coming
7422082 On a second look, the idea that this... abusive relationship?... has been going on for a while is more evident. It actually makes it a more powerful statement. Nice. Horrific and beautiful, juxtaposed.
Well, that was a thing.
Well written but felt rushed at the end. That part, where he has his revelation, could have used a lot more build up and a stronger catalyst than a look, no matter how poignant. IMO It takes a lot more to go from zero to suicide than what was depicted.
Part of me wants Fluttershy to catch him...
First:
While I want to sit back and say that the horror in this piece works, I can't say I was particularly blown away or disgusted by this piece. I think the suicide bit was rushed, but I'm not sure if I could see a different ending here. I can't say that Thunderlane -feels- like a villain. And in a piece like this, are we supposed to empathize with him? Are we supposed to root for him?
I'm a bit lost as to what the purpose of this piece is. It's not a clop fic, because it doesn't feel sexy. It feels like a power rush more than anything else. The whole piece is about power and breaking Fluttershy.
I'll completely put aside that this first person story was in the narrative perspective of someone who killed themselves, or attempted anyway. If Thunderlane lived long enough to get this down on paper, I'd assume he's dead, but it would be dumb of me to assume that, because I'm honestly lost.
Was the purpose of this to be an outlet for personal things? Or is there a message or moral to take from this? Or am I just horribly desensitized from 4chan?
I sense a purpose for penning this, Lord Regidar. May peace come swiftly.
Did you have the Camel in mind when you made this story?
7422854 I'm sorry, I have no idea what that is
7422881
The Camel is a user on this website famous for making thunderlane a rapist in basically every story of his that features him.
7422893 oh
well, no
I had no idea
it was merely a coincidence
7422893 actually, come to think of it, I've read a few of his works but I didn't make the connection until just now
Could someone sum this up?
rekt
"Moooooooom, Regi's projecting again!"
7439073 "let him be, at least he's not explicitly bitching to us about it any more"
Do I sense a reference in the chapter title?
7443293 to die by your side
7443835 well the pleasure, the privilege is mine.
7421942
7422243 "I believe that what people who have committed crimes need is not punishment, but rather the knowledge of the pain of being forgiven." - Inio Asano
This is a simply beautiful story. While not my normal kink, it certainly views an interesting side of the picture.
7626531 thank you
it's not intended as a clopfic though so
7629253 clop is for kids, being able to see and absorb all that despair is priceless
7631383 i'm like a sponge full of bad feels
7631700
Well, I have nothing on the mind but "what." Not in a "this went over my head" way, but in a "so what do I think now" way. Hopefully that's what you were going for. I have to wonder, though; is it better for the majority to let him die, or torture him with acceptance?
Questions like that, my man, is why I would never accept any position of authority that involves punishment. Thought-provoking work. Though, I have to wonder what's going on in Fluttershy's head, especially when she wakes up. God knows about his other victims,.
Speaking of:
Fucker better do a flip
That was great.
8008107 I'm glad you think so
Mind blown away, "BOOM!"
Everyone knows that you are fucked up, and everyone knows that I am fucked up. But, does everyone know that you, are more fucked up than me?
Holy fucking shit that is what immediately clicked in my head as I read this, this felt like I Was a Prisoner in your Skull condensed into a short story damn this is a masterpiece holy fuck, also Radiohead reference?
https://m.You went to the bathroom, to take a shower, you had soap, you had a towel, shampoo, washcloth, a brush... everything was fine... but you had to call me to come turn on the water for you, you didn't know where or how.
This story hits head, and I have now made it my mission to make a Swans reference in every story you've made.