The tall glass doors to the library slowly creak open.
Twilight Sparkle and Starlight Glimmer hobble through the door-frame, bathed in moonlight from the windows. Their manes are a frazzled mess and there are bags under their eyes from countless, untold hours of intense experimentation. Still—even as they teeter from utter exhaustion—they are both smiling. Tenderly.
They turn to look towards me. Twilight nods.
One leg at a time...
...I hobble past them.
My joints are stiff, my muscles even stiffer.
But...
It doesn't stop me.
I limp forward, my eyes glued to a series of sleeping bags stretched out across the floor of the library.
Two of the mats are empty. That's because Maud and Marble have scooted into the center—where their older sister Limestone has both mares safely tucked away beneath her strong forelimbs. Together, the three slumber the nightly hours away, silent and still. Limestone, of course, is drooling a bit. Maud's body slowly rises and falls while Marble clings to the other two in a fetal position.
I take in all of the details that I can, because I already feel tears fogging up the corners of my vision.
"Mmmmmm..." The air fills with song. My song. I crawl on my knees and slide over to the group. "Silly fillies..." I sweep all three of them into the fuzziest, cuddliest hug. "...how can I ever stop smiling when I've got the absolute best sisters in the world?"
They say nothing. Limestone snorts in mid-sleep, and I try not to giggle. Marble's tail wraps quietly around me while Maud's cheek cuddles into my fetlock.
There's a choking sound from behind me. Twilight shushes Starlight, and the two unicorns make a quiet exit, leaving the four of us to snuggle warmly together until sunrise.
Four slices.
Chill out
7412104 Well, this was cute.
*fires freeze gun at you*
CHILL OUT!
Pi is De jure Four.
More at 11. :Discord:
This is a story about Pinkie Pie. The second chapter has 314 words. God damnit.
*Whipping tears away* This... this was so good.
awwwww...
Here I thought the unicorn would have been Moondancer
So what is your take on Pinkie pie?
There's a slight problem with this.
I don't seem to be able to favorite this more than once, and the upvote stops at one. This is a problem.
Well done, Skirts. Yet another masterpiece.
So many layers to this story. I love it.
Hmm. Normally, I'd say that this kind of fic feels like a cop out; using a single moment that wasn't explicitly shown to draw in "feels" rather than attempting to tell a legitimate story, thus negating any emotional appeal it provokes.
I can not say such a thing with this story.
I can sense each of the Pie sister's personalty types and coping mechanisms, we are given a window into the crux of character development, rather than a quick punch to the stomach meant solely to make the hug that comes after more fulfilling. Good work with this one, good work indeed.
I also appreciate the allusion to As I lay Dying. It's a nice touch.
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7412188 The problem with Discord is that he's not a solver of problems, he's a creator. His magic is incredibly powerful, but unpredictable. I imagine he was considered a last resort, as he could end up turning her from stone to pudding.
The blow-up doll next to me looked at me with a surprised face.
Nice blend of the sisters each having their own time with Pinkie and yet all together at the same time.
So, it this an entry to submitting for TDR's "Stories-in-Stone" collection? Maybe not quite the length of time Applejack got stuck, but I think it qualifies.
Thanks!
7413493 Pffffff
Goddammit, Skirts.
You really know how to pull on the Heartstrings when you want to.
And I'm being serious about that, ya big fuzzball.
Just wanted to come back and say that this is my favorite Pie sister story ever. It's so incredibly rare to find a story with all of them as a whole after Hearthbreakers aired. This was written so beautifully and it really was bittersweet to read.
Also I hope to see more Pinkie in your stories nudge nudge, wink winkBut, yeah, wonderful job.
Not bad, although I feel like it lacks something in only implying they succeeded somehow and not really telling us. I also find it annoying to be presented with monologue from different ponies that clearly happens at different and no chronological markers at all to tell how spread out they are. Ultimately there's a little of the warm and fuzzy, but it feels like an unfinished sketch.
7413683 Have you ever noticed how every blow-up doll always seems to have a surprised look on their faces? It's like they're taken aback by the fact that someone wants to 'inflate' them, right?
Oh, and if the author of this story is reading this comment; your story is pretty good. I'm not going to make any promises here because I don't know if I want to do it yet or not, but I'd like to ask for your permission to do a reading of this fanfic on my YouTube channel in advance. A short fanfic reading would provide my YouTube channel with some content to appease the subscribers while also giving me extra time to work on my latest One Punch Pony VS Changelings animation.
So, what do you say? May I have your permission in advance in case I decide to go ahead and do a reading? Just to warn you though, I'm a British guy, so if you choose to listen to the reading you will have to tolerate a bloke's voice trying to impersonate a female when I read the lines of the female characters.
Oh lord, Pinkie Pie will be ruined forever when I come to voice her lines. XD
I think Starlight would be the perfect pony to deal with this. Take the time travel spell, go back grab the cockatrice while it was a live, make it fix things, then break it's damn neck and drop it where it was found dead
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WEEEELLL
... It was found dead. So that is entirely possible. But wouldn't that lead to a paradox? Or is that how it all flows? I do tend to get a bit easily confused with thinking in those circles :|
Very good. I'm guessing Twilight and Starlight figured out a way to reverse it together? Or perhaps found another cockatrice to reverse the stoning? Or they could have used the de-stoning spell Celestia used to free Discord in Keep Calm And Flutter On. Interesting. I'd like to know how they freed her.
Impressive. I've already said what I felt in my first comment, so I won't say anything more.
7414709 It's a bootstrap paradox, basically the past was manufactured in order to preserve the present/future.
And Starlight Glimmer once more creates all magic required to save the day!
...
She's like Eric Cartman having the power to have all the powers...
7414709 it would create a paradox, a stable paradox. Which instead of fucking everything up just kinda happens, with no adverse effects besides a headache trying to figure it out but I could be wrong.
7415840 Well, at least the fanfic is canonically correct right? :b
7415838 it takes six elements to do anything. They're down to five
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Who says the element of Laughter stopped working? If anything makes more sense to me, the others focus their power on Pinkie and her element if able to cure her from the inside out. It's likely the mental, physical and spiritual equivalent of pushing a Watermelon though a key hole.
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7417285 nice story there. Twilight's complaints about having to find it are really weak though, since they know where Pinkie was turned to stone and they know where it was found dead. So, go to either of those two places
Anybody else that thought of THAT when they read the title?
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7417639 Yes.
I don't like them, but yes.
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Ahh, okay. I knew it was supposed to work out, but I couldn't find the words to convey it :| Not without going around and around or using the wrong technical term for it. Thanks giving me the proper term! \o/
@Lunar specifically, the way it was explained by Driver is how it works out. If they didn't go back to fix it then it'd never happen, but since they did go back, the timeline progresses "normally".
7417785 Ah, thanks I knew I messed it up a little.
7418248 To give a good example, look at It's About Time.
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(This made me actually go and read that fic. Glad I did, it's a good one.)
Another beautiful story!
Now excuse me as I bawl me eyes out.
Short, disjointed, and packed with emotion and character.
Something only the few like ss&e can pull off.
Never doubted it even for a moment. Good on ya, Twi. Starlight.
Nice pacing. I always enjoy reading your stuff, SSE.
7417117 The cockatrice is that little beaked thing on Jabba the Hut...
Oh god... that works... now someone's going to make a fanfic of it!
Absolutely lovely.
I particularly liked the way Maud Pie opened up to share a personal part of herself.
Not that the other two weren't nice too, is just hers was probably the best way to handle the possible loss of someone important out of the three.
And it hit me right in the feels.
~Leonzilla
Greats story! I loved every bit of the emotions and details! Well done .
7417639 I suspect the title is referring to the novel "As I Lay Dying" by William Faulkner which was published in 1930.
Was going to like it, but the number of likes are at 314.
Never mind, a favourite should suffice, right?
I reviewed this story as part of Read It Now Reviews #89.
My review can be found here.
7437809 I voted 5 million times for Trump. And then gave him the big red nuke button. In that future where he's President. This then gave me the nuclear powers to become God, allowing me to come back in time and set these events in motion!
And the paradoxes don't matter because Universal Plot Convenience, so there!
I saw this in my RiL and thought, "this looks reeeeally familiar."
Then I saw the note at the bottom and remembered why.
This was a good read overall, but I feel like Limestone rambled a lot.
I'm glad it had a happy ending. I was kind of expecting the ending to take place hundreds of years in the future, when Pinkie's fun-talents are desperately needed.
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That was amazing.