Fighting for what you believe in is sometimes all you can do, so you should do so. Freedom; Opinion; Love; Answers; Everything has a price, but what are you willing to pay for it?
My name was Mike. I was a simple teenager in a town. I had a decent life. Although, besides my family and friends, nothing really tied me to the world. I'm sure many of people have thought about it, but well it actually did happen to me. I was in fact placed on a different world, and let me tell you, its definitely not what you would be used to. I had no survival training, but luckily the world was inhabited, just not what I was used to.
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I going follow this story
good story
, is this like your human and you or something else ?
7607752 Kind of. I want to see if I'm going to just do a Verse of it and go that route or do something completely different.
So YHAY but Sweetie is without scar.
Not so much to give a score. Next chapter will determine if this story is good or not.
Yes an update keep it going please!
Continue.
Not bad... Not bad at all.
Great chapter.
So is this the expected formula for the whole story? Some type of cruelty happens and then the main character turns into the Incredible Hulk and just beats up ponies?
Also, assuming pony horns are in any way like horns on animals in our world, then with their shape and size, any attempt to "snap" them with your bare hands would almost certainly cave in the pony's skull in the process. Which is why I get a little annoyed whenever an HiE does it. You might be able to snap Princess Celestia's horn near the tip without caving in her skull, but the typical unicorn horns as seen on the show are too wide and short, you'd end up putting too much force toward their skull in the process of trying to separate part of the horn.
7717162 love it.
Nice. 65.media.tumblr.com/e89e4f4659b331457ba6e6e56bfbe2f2/tumblr_nmq5vse6Gf1rllf0lo1_500.png
Kinda fast but i loved it :D
7612217 OR it is Sweetie before the scar...
i wonder if there a deep history of the tragic tale of humankind suffering and downgrade of their species to animals to ponies like maybe the original humans lived perfectly fine with the world be nomadic before the ponies came like maybe the ponies back then tried to enslave them or tried to run them off but it didn't work long term and they were surviving the windigos winter pretty good so maybe the ponies decided to do something worse or drastic? like stealing the children for breeding stock and experimenting after maybe banishing the adults like the mirror a good example of that or they hex them pretty hard to displace them in time like the empire had for example.
7747795 This takes the concept, but it's not a YHaY verse. I plan to have many differences, but of course, there will always be gaping similarities.
7747889 That's deep.
7748116 is it a good theory?
7748381
I mean, it's a theory, but it might not be the best theory.
7748858 ah ok
A few minor critiques, firstly would ponies immediately assume he was a wild human. A stray dog wearing dog clothes wouldent be immediately seen as a threat. Perhaps add something that might make it seem like hes a wild animal, like him comming out of the woods after days in the wilderness. Or him being compleetly naked. Secondly his designer clothes, it feels like Applejack recognized his shoe brand as Nike. Perhaps instead of naming the brand you could spend a little time describing what the brand-mark looks like. The Nike check mark is kind of iconic and easy to describe. As far as prologues go this was pretty good. If you continue to work on this I foresee it being a very good story.
Awesome, this story is not given enough recognition it is one of my favorites.
Great chapter as always i'm looking forward for the next chapter.
more plez
This is so good
Yes !!Finally.
Interesting
Looking forward to the next chapter
wow.....
Oh boy, there's not going going to be a war is there?
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i hope this bitch goes to die in a fire👿👿👿👿
More please!
This. Was. Awsome.
But why is it cance-e-elled?? Are you bad at slice of life?
Eh, it’s fine.
please update
Is this history dead??