• Member Since 23rd Jan, 2016
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Hello, my name is Timothy Adams, I used to be a human. Emphasis on used to. One minute I was walking to my house, and the next minute I'm falling from the sky, in the body of a dragon. Now, some would say it'd be awesome to be a dragon. Well, let me tell you, it's not as fun as you think. But, it's not just me, my three friends are here as well. Bad news, we are all different species. Even more, I have a feeling something more is going on.

Now with an editor, Flutterbrony539!

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 22 )

Nice start. And you didn't leave it too long with who was behind it. And no one's passing around the idiot ball yet! I hate it when they do that.

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What's the idiot ball, if you dont mind me asking?

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Oh, thanks Amethyst!

7419164 You're welcome, I guess.

I, I will be king
And you, you will be queen
Though nothing, will drive them away
We can beat them, just for one day
We can be heroes, just for one day

*droning guitars*

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Heroes by David Bowie. Just the first thing I thought about when I saw this on my feed.

I will follow the further expansions of this story, it seems interesting.

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Ah, I'm glad you like it so far.

Hmm, well this is an interesting intro. No characters thrown under the bus or lengthy pre-Equestria that we honestly don't care about. No technical errors jumped out at me, either. I think I'd like to read where this is going!

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Glad you like it! Next chapter will focus on the other three characters. In fact, I've already started it. Should be up before the weeks end! :pinkiehappy:

Interesting. Very interesting. :twilightsmile:

And tasty too! :pinkiehappy:

Pinky... Please don't eat the fanfiction. :facehoof:

Dragon: Breathes fire, has wings; no known additional abilities - normal

Pegasus: has wings; no known additional abilities - normal

Changeling Queen: Is a Changeling Queen, used to be a guy - normal?

Griffon: has wings and talons; can apparently project ice and cold - not normal!

Together they are: The Ponypuff Mares! :pinkiehappy:

Pinkie, Only two of them are actually mares... :facehoof:

Jeffery: "And I used to be a guy! And human!"

Lyra: "Marry me!"

Bon Bon: "LYRA!?"

Lyra: "Oops? I mean, I have so many questions! That's it, questions! Just... Questions!"

Bon Bon: "That better be all it is..."

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Haha! Thanks for giving me a good laugh!

Very good! It's unusual to see the victims characters reveal the show, but it's working for them.

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Thanks! Yeah, I thought it'd be interesting to have the characters awkwardly reveal that they did or didn't watch the show. Either way, it's awkward. If you didn't, you had to explain why, and most answers would be because it's a kids show or you just didn't like it. And if you did, you're basically spying on them.

If Timothy and his friends were voiced, what would he sound like?

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Probably just a regular 22 year old american male. Didn't really give it much thought. Why?

More thanks!

Yeah, Jon has every right to be pissed and end his friendship with Tim, and Casandra has every right to dump Tim right now seeing as he basically just told them, "fuck your opinions if I have to risk my life then I'm betting yours too on the word of a complete stranger."

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