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Zephyr Spark


An aspiring writer who will only write/read MLP stories staring Spike and Twilight.

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Garble and his cohorts kidnapped Rarity, and sent a ransom letter to Spike. Their only demands: Spike tells no one and gives Garble the Dragon Lord Staff. Spike must engage the trio in a deadly game of cat and mouse to keep Garble from getting his claws on the scepter. Failure could spell disaster for all of Equestria and a war between dragons and ponies.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 14 )

I love the story so far I wish I had more time to read but so far I love the story

7512231 Thank you! :twilightsmile: I can't give an ETA on the next chapter but I promise it will come.

I'm speechless, this chapter had me on the edge of my bed waiting to see what would happen next. Can't wait too find out why Spike let go but I'm pretty sure I already know.....:moustache:

7623490 Thanks! I'm looking forward to writing it.

7630920 Next chapter is coming soon.

Kinda reminds me of what my martial arts teacher sometimes says: I'm not stronger than you, and I'm not faster than you; but I'm a heck of a lot smarter than you.
that's not directed at me, of course; she's speaking more theoretically

A nice short fic, thanks for writing!

7633537 I definitely understand what you mean. I wrote this story under that kind of concept of brains beating brawn after watching clever characters in anime (particularly Hunter x Hunter) overcome foes far more powerful than themselves just by outthinking them. The battle was already decided before it begun because it was fought in the mind.

This story is criminaly underated. I love it.

7634632 Aw, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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