Captain_Hairball
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Good story, love the ending with twi being just as perverse as the eqg rarity and fluttershy
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Thanks!
I didn't know how much I needed this story until I read it. Thanks.
The beginning scene was pretty great, Flutters' back and forth with Rarity, and the shenanigans with the jogger.
Then the car ride just made me uncomfortable. At least if someone's getting a Highway Helper they aren't constantly looking in the damn back seat, at least it got better when they pulled over and things got steamier.
This is how you advertise the fic, and then right square in the middle you have an intense tonal shift with Rarity being a bitch and shaming Fluttershy for having large breasts that have undergone the trials of child-rearing and time. Literally the things that make a MILF.
And then when Spike, someone who cares for Fluttershy and not only loves the way she looks but wants her to, tries to object and say that Fluttershy is perfect and sexy just the way she is "Shut up, Spike." Yeah, that shit pissed me off, and I think it was supposed to be funny? Either way, major boner kill.
I thought the sex scenes were really good, and the fic started off strong, but the settings and dialogue didn't work a lot of the time.
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Solid feedback! I'm not sure I agree, but I'll consider it when I have a little time to myself tonight.
You stole my bit!
Hehe, nah, seriously though, about time someone else mined the dog!Spike storyline for some sensual sexiness.
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Oh, I didn't even know you did a dog Spike thing!!! *scurries over*
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Have fun with it, it's a story I considered a genuine pleasure to write and like to think is very nice to read.
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I forgot how many stories you've written. Which one its it?
Great story! And Twilight will probably provide material for a sequel.
Don't you mean demonstrate, Twilight?
7483913 that would be great. Feel kinda bad for Flutters though. She seemed so sad. Never-the-less, fantastic story.
Don't usually read clopfics, but this one here got me curious and it really arouses me, like a lot. The descriptive details is what got me. *blush* I'm really starting to like these kinds of stories now.
Keep doing more of these please <3
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LOL I am corrupting the innocent.
Thank you! I'll keep writing.
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Oh, Faved btw. Prolly one of your best stories despite being a good clopfic.
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Every Spike has his day.
10/10 Would not mind reading a prequel about the trio's first times
As it later turns out, the reason why Fluttershy had no problem fitting Spike's knot is not merely that she gave birth before, but rather the fact that she has been sneaking through the portal into Equestria regularly for years, in order to fuck loads and loads of stallions (and griffons and donkeys and...). They may not be actual animals or be quite as big as the horses she has experienced back home, but this way there's no need for secrecy or preparation, and less risk of needing medical attention afterwards.
This finally explains how the original Equestrian Fluttershy mysteriously gained a widespread reputation for being a complete and utter slut that any stallion can just walk up to and mount at a moment's notice. Once she learns about this, pony Fluttershy sends her human counterpart a heartfelt "Thank You" note.
yay.
Fantastic story, would love sequel and/or prequel!
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Oh, I think I'll write more of these! :D Thanks!
Please write a sequel
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Working on one! No release date, yet! I started bunch of stories when I was exhausted at the end of the summer, and I need to sort them out and and outline them. The sequel could be long -- you know Twilight, everything's a friendship problem with her.
My, my, my.
How lovely. Very enjoyable.
Have a like.
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Thank yooou!
I would very much like a sequel. Spike is finally getting some tail. And has a tail. Alright, this joke is confused.
Regardless, some very hot sex, even if the dialogue was a little wonky at times.
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Thx!
A sequel is in the editing process actually! Specifically the "trying to sort out my own torturered sentence construction" phase, which is followed by the "nagging Scoots to fix my commas " phase.
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Fix your own damn commas, old man; I'm a busy kid with card games to play and people to do! And homework to, um, not do.
this is horrible and your horrible..... write moar... >.>
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Thanks. That's what I was going for.
There's another one! :D Check my stories!
I don't know why I find this so hot...
I actually see Twilight as capable of meaning it seriously. That she does want to study Fluttershy's and Rarity's attraction to him in a scientific manner. Since it's not quite beastiality yet it's also not another human.
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