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Queen Sanguine Dreams

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Princess Twilight Sparkle has received an urgent letter from Princess Celestia, demanding her immediate presence in Canterlot.

Twilight has no idea what she is needed for, but it gives her time to take a break from the Cutie Map's demands.

Arriving at the palace, something seems out of place, causing Twilight to worry.

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What was wrong with it, specifically?

Just saying 'X was bad' doesnt help me.


She was never in the castle, she mentioned it.

Sorry if im being rude. I get annoyed when people glance at what I wrote without reading it.

This was only ever an idea I wrote in the spur of the moment anyway.


Oh, you're that kind of person.


The 'better than thou, I am perfect.' Type.


Because ordering me to be quiet is what passes as nice for you.

Angsty teen.

Im equally finished with speaking to you.


Well, I apologise to you for my behavior. I'm pretty sure we could work out our disagreements over a voice chat, since we're ( or at least I'm) having troubles with text.

I'm at work right now, but if you're willing to talk, I'm free the next three days to do so.

Again, I apologise for how I acted.



Oh, I know those feels :raritydespair:

I just recently received an old windows XP computer to write on, or I'd still be using my phone.

I feel ashamed for how I acted. I'm overly sensitive when it comes to criticism, I guess.

Not cool, Celestia. Not cool. You too, Trixie. :rainbowlaugh:

What kind of grade does a changeling-proto queen of White Tail Woods get on her stories?
"Aze" c;
*jumps out the window*

That joke was in poor taste.

I LOVE IT :pinkiehappy:

7401688 I’ll admit: that was a good one.

*Sees the Clairvoyent/Sanguine conversation* This is why I try to offer detailed criticism, and make it clear I think every story has potential...I liked this one. Short, sweet, evil.

I hope Luna was in on the prank. There's a good chance Twilight's next move would be to go to Luna...

Or--they could double-down on the Evil and frame Twilight for the "murder" of Celestia.
Hey, it'd be fun to see Twilight become a drooling catatonic.

...sanity temporarily "postponed." :derpytongue2: <Like your mail!)

See, this is why you take "Discussing what to do if X died" Meetings seriously... otherwise you force the Troll Princess to really dig in why it's important.

Hehe... I can confirm that sanity goes out the window in a "death prank panic".

I have two younger brothers and a younger sister. The sister and middle brother pranked our little brother once. My sister put ketchup on my brother's head and he laid down at the bottom of the stairs. Then she screamed "Oh my God, he's dead!"...

It took all THREE of us to pry the phone out of my little brother's hands cause he was DETERMINED to call 911!
Even after the prank was busted! :twilightoops:

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