I would love to write stories, but i'm afraid they all suck.
Caught in the midst of a riot, "you" are somehow caught and ripped from reality. You wake up in a strange land that really seems like it's straight out of a kid's cartoon with...talking...horses?
What the hell is going on?
(2nd person fic. Just read the damned thing.)
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Sweet. I'm following this one.
Proceed...
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_future.png What the hay? I want to see where this is going.
I like it so far.
Interesting. Let's see where this goes.
you have my interest
chalnge naw too mainstream pinkie pies logic tested (somehow I have found ways for it to be scientifically possible but they are just theories)
Luna, dont go Nightmare on us again! ........... What? Its obvious. This guy knows how to topple a government. And im betting Luna wants the throne.
799024
...That actually makes sense
799105 It does?! Damn it im losing my touch!
799123
Me too.
make next one soon plese
MOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png
799123 meh losing ones touch aint that bad its just the first step into insanity step two is regaining that touch and become more random step three is becoming spitefull and stuff and thats as far as I've gotten the voices started in step two for me ( I am not schitzophrenic its propably some weirrd mix of MPD and schitzophrenia I am not sure if I used the right abreviation for what I'm talking about oh well)
799690
Dude what?
799797 dunno I understand pinkie pie better than myself than again I understand most anyone other than myself
800063 Probably since punctuation is lost on you.
Okay wait,
"You reached into your pocket and grabbed and slammed it down to the ground,"
Grabbed what?
800497 no because im a slightly insane violent loner who fails t see the use in freinds so seeks entertainment through personality quizzes and reading stories upon this site so yeah (and because I'm bored may as well tell you of the quiz site quizilla.com yadda yadda yadda and stuff)
800499
Fixed, my bad, and many thanks for catching that.
800527 I'm going to rewrite that.
"No, because I'm a slightly insane, violent loner who fails to see the use in friends, so seeks entertainment through personality quizzes and reading stories on this site. So yeah, (and because I'm bored, I might as well tell you the name of the quiz site. "Quizilla.com" yadda yadda yadda and stuff.)"
I just added puncuation, fixed grammar, editing spelling, and "yadda yadda yadda". (I still don't know why you put that.) Also, if you see no value in friendship, then why watch MLP? Half the dang title is put towards, "Friendship" and how "Magical" it is. Source your arguments.
800552 Not a problem, my friend-o.
800591 watch stopped watching it I mostly just read the darker and more violent fics such as cupcakes I love that one people are jerks and told me it was all scary and stuff then I found a normal version of it smilled the entire time helps that I hate rainbow dash way too many people I know that act just like her that I want to destroy but I don't have a good reason yet and your grammar annoys me
800625 AAAAAAAH! I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOU ARE TRYING TO SAAAAY!
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800695
...Me neither. To be honest.
Grammar is important, because people won't understand you without it.
800706 I HAVE SPEAK GRAMMAR BUT UNLESS ITS IMPORTANT IT DOESN'T MATTER TO ME stupid twitchy finger
800730 I have speak grammar! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
Meanwhile, in my mind...
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*atomic bomb*
800735
Sounds like you just had a mind-blowing grammar-gasm.
800738 and I am now going to assume my place in the shadow
800738 More like a grammar-tastrophy.
800738 Or a grammar-pocolypse.
Topple another government? I so called that.
836008
That you did.
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'Twas a good chapter! keep up the good work!
i like where this is going
beautiful
Oh great another riot
ahem FIRST, and i love the story so far. you very much portray me in just about every game i play
The human trusted Luna far too easily. Letting her magic into his/her head, unwise...
hmmm...i say kill em both
Why not? Luna is awesome.
kll them both
and taste the rainbow if you know what i mean
dammit, you fight to bring down the likes of Luna not just to bring down any Government, you know Celestia means well, you know Luna doesn´t, this shouldn´t be that hard of a choice.
Human randomly trusting Luna in a plan for anarchy? I call shennanigens. I really do. I think maybe it will play out as a double agent scenario. He's all, "And now I'm against Luna because this is wrong." Simply IMO over here.
What are you gonna do!? TELL ME!! NOW!
nice
I liked the choose your ending option it was nice. i am a good person usually so i chose this one, but i shall read the other one out of curiosity. I loved the story. Hope you feel better.
(first)
ya choose your own!
first
So, is there any possibility of a sequel?
927072
Which ending?