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This story is a sequel to Why I stopped watching My Little Pony

Now I lay me down to sleep I pray the Lord TWILIGHT my soul to keep and If I die before I wake I pray the Lord TWILIGHT my soul to take.
-Graffiti covering the bedroom walls of Chad Hall age 11. Missing since 10/10/2014.

Artwork done be the insanely talented Maii
Authors Note:Full credit to this story in the series goes to MisterNick. As we were working on this one he had an idea for the direction and I let him run wild with it. This story is infinitely better under his guiding hand. Being as much his and Maii's as it is mine.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 77 )
Comment posted by MisterNick deleted Aug 22nd, 2016
Comment posted by Totally_Original deleted Nov 18th, 2016

the cover art creeps the shit outta me.......:fluttershbad:

This is why your on my favorite authors list. :yay:

Awesome job on this! I'm a sucker for horror, especially now more than ever, having put put own horror story out yesterday ^.^

I'm very very pleased with this~

Si... wait what? What's... so the ponies are some ancient monster and Simon was... Discord? The fuck happened? I don't understand...

7731327 Think of the MLP show as a kind of predator that watches and waits.

7731344 Ah yess..... wait no that's fucking creepy. I need more of this and another of your stories damn it! You glorious bastard!

I'm sorry, but I had to stop reading when I saw this:

"It’s probably a corrupted computer file or something."


How in the living name of the Ancients is that possible for someone to dismiss? Yeah, there are viruses and worms out there that can cause something similar to this to happen, but not at this scale. This is possibly the most unrealistic dismiss I have ever seen in media. If these three are not even the slightest bit suspicious, then I have no idea what just happened there.

This is more of a nitpick than an insult. I honestly laughed when I saw how stubborn that reaction to a pony tapping on a computer screen was. You have to be rock solid, or, as stubborn as the pharaoh in Exodus. I cannot believe what I just saw...

Maybe Josh is the father of the girl who-DiEd-:pinkiecrazy: went missing in 2014...:pinkiehappy:

Wait-what does this have to do with the 11 year old that went missing? :pinkiegasp:

Which pony was inside Josh? I think it was rather::twilightsmile: or :rainbowdetermined2:.



Reason: It talked about having a horn. Rainbow Dash does not have a horn, so problem solved.

Reason it's not :raritywink:: It is really only hinted that it is not her due to the pony wanting to use the librarian and having a personality that drove away from her.

Honestly I didn't understand the whole story. Some of the characters were not that familiar to me and some of the events popped out from nowhere, even if I read the previous works. There are some good aspects like turning the show into a horror film and the interactions between characters, though.

I do rather like this story. It feels rather unfinished, but that's probably just the polishing on it.

... I do want to know who Perdy is though. Or more about her. Or just generally more of this universe.

7801241 That's what I was thinking some time after I posted it, especially considering another fic, but it doesn't stay in line with the character concept - I think the 'series' is supposed to be in the same universe?

Comment posted by DaVioletReader deleted Dec 20th, 2016

I get the feeling you watched In the Mouth of Madness at some point.

You definitely saw or read In the Mouth of Madness.

7940267 You'll have to ask MisterNick about that.

Before I read this, what is the Gore, Horror and Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

Okay, this was a chapter that screamed 'Silent Hill', but it works so well that I have to read the rest of this story now!

Simon Says!


Actually it was inspired from the book and movie from the mouth of madness.

You've grabbed my attention. What could Josh have done? Well, I'm sure I'll find out on the next episode of Dra-- the next chapter!

There was a certain lack of commas that took a bit away, but ultimately I don't think that took away from the story -- just a little of the clarity.

Gloam is a synonym of twilight.
This is the only chapter I've read so far.

I picked out this detail wondering if it will be of any significance in the future.

I have mixed feelings.
The best way I can describe this is a semi- coherent story line with somewhat bad grammar and meandering flow. It feels like there's no transition between situations and everything just feels like it's being rambled.
No. Scratch that. The best way I can describe this is with one word: "Awkward" None of the characters seem to have any real emotion. It's like reading a story about mannequins. That- coupled with the bad grammar and half baked storyline leaves me feeling puzzled.

That and "It’s probably a corrupted computer file or something." kind of turned me off too. How could a corrupted file ask to unpause a video?

Thank you for the critism it is appreciated.

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Subtle, this story is not. :V

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I don't know why I keep reading these, but they are nothing if not utterly fascinating.

So weird, seeing a story that's creepy pasta like, but at the same time its good.

I mean, I have not ever been on a creepypasta website, unless you count SCP wiki, but im going to guess that most creepypastas are.. kinda bad, but this one (if you count it as a creepypasta) is good

Thank you. Although I feel as the series has progressed it has moved away from being a Creepypasta and more horror now.

I want to read this, but first I have to say that the fact that the smile in the cover picture doesn't continue onto both sides of her face disturbs me way more than it should.

R.L. Stine plot twist in the end, right? Nice Work BTW

Why does everyone love creepypastas so much? I think all the people who love "Cupcakes" just enjoy reading about Rainbow Dash getting tortured and murdered!!! This is a show 4 kids, not "Child's Play!"

This was all manners of fucked up dude. Good work. :)

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