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Yeah, gotta agree with you there...
Umm...
No.
Sweet mother of triggers.
Sounds right up my alley.
I'll be with you in a sec, just got to scrub my brain of any form of moral compass.
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lol Maybe I went overboard with the trigger warnings? It was supposed to represent a portal to Celestial bliss, not a hellmouth.
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Now I got a Why-Boner...
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If this is true TWILESTIA, i'll try to read it.
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It contains Twilight and Celestia in a student/teacher relationship, perhaps with some mother/daughter vibes. But if you define "true Twilestia" as a romantic pairing, then no. That's why there's no romance tag.
If that's what you were looking for, then I'm sorry. I hope you have better luck elsewhere.
7407472 Well, thanks for clearing that
, luck with your story 
I think my favourite part of this is the creativeness of the outfit Celestia is wearing.
7407349 True Twilestia is rare these days.
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I think I went into a bit too much detail and ended up slowing down the pacing more than I should, but that's because it was so much fun to describe. A huge part of the reason I wrote this story was just the mental image of fillyTwilight walking in on her goddess-teacher while she's dressed like a BDSM porn star and jacking off.
There actually IS a backstory reason why Celestia is into that kind of thing, by the way, which I might get into if I write more in this continuity.
7407665
Personally, I liked Twilestia a lot more back when Twilight was a just a librarian, student, and aspiring scientist/magician who idolized her teacher/mother/ruler/goddess (such as in the fantastic The Other Mare). In the hands of a skilled author, the incredibly skewed power dynamics made the relationship fun and intriguing.
Now, the distance between the two has been bridged so much (both by Twilight being raised up and by Celestia being brought down) that it's just not as interesting to me. Twilestia is still fun, but I think I prefer something more zany like Princest or a villainess/Princess ship.
7407852 Nope not a fan princest, hate incest. Sorry personal preference, anyway... but oddly I'm a fan of mooncest.
7407852 Hah, now I'm hopefully looking forward to Celestia's backstory.
And maybe that awkward moment when the Princess finds out just how Twilight got little Spike to eat... 
You can never really go wrong with Princest (or Twysalis), IMO.
Wow, this was a special kind of amazing. I mean, the concept is the kind of outlandish that seems like it should surprise me but really doesn't; but it's so awful clopfic and yet you manage to deal with things on a oddly serious level. These aren't porn pastiches of Twilight and Celestia – I actually feel their real characters here, if in a slightly uninhibited and oversexed context. The dynamic between them was really cute, and the amount of trust and appreciation that Celestia has for Twilight, and the respect and admiration going in the opposite direction are rarely this well represented even in fics specifically about that.
It's also like, insanely kinky in a number of creative ways, and I can't help but appreciate that.
There's no way you're a new writer: do you have a SFW account somewhere? I'd really like to read your other words, if I haven't already.
This was very well written. I really liked the thought process going through twilight's head, although her logic was abnormal. Good character interaction with some campy porn logic made this a great read. The subject matter may not be everyone's cup of tea, but I am glad to have read it.
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lol You're right, that IS odd. Isn't mooncest just selfcest? And isn't selfcest at least as weird as incest?
...To be honest, as someone with quite a few siblings, I find incest to be kind of icky myself. Except with the Princesses for some reason. I think it's because they're not children or young adults living in the same household or whatever, they're actually more like classical gods, and if Greek mythology teaches us anything, it's that Zeus and Friends get away with some weird shit.
Also, I just really, truly like the two of them together. I'd almost be tempted to go the route of some authors and write them as "not really related," but that feels like the coward's way out.
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Yeah, I've been considering a follow-up chapter. If I do write it, I may have to stretch the bounds of campy porn logic to explain why Celestia is okay with... uh. "The Situation."
After that (assuming I write more clop at all) I think I would want to move away from foalcon and towards regular romantic pairings. I've been considering several, and you'll be happy to note that Princest and Twysalis are near the top of the list.
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Thank you for the kind words! Considering some of the things I see make it to the feature box, I was a little bit worried that I was... overexerting myself for what is essentially an extended smut scene, but I'm glad that someone appreciates my efforts.
Unlike, I think, most fanfic authors, I'm actually much more comfortable with OC's than canon characters, so I'm glad you appreciated the characterization here. I know there was room for improvement, but it's kind of tricky when you're walking the tightrope between porn logic and real logic, as you touched on.
Beyond a possible follow-up chapter, I don't think I'm going to do too much with foalcon or extravagant fetish gear from here-on-out. Hermaphrodites, semen-ingestion (by consenting adults), and somewhat-lavish descriptions of sexual organs and sex acts are probably going to be staples of my work. Assuming I decide to write anymore clop.
Also:
...I appreciate your use of understatement here.
I think most of my talent comes from a lifetime of reading (and more recently critiquing) other people's work, but I... have written one "real" story before (not school project garbage or whatever). I'll send you a link, but please be discreet. I have separate accounts for a reason.
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Glad you enjoyed it! A much more experienced clop-writer friend of mine pointed out some ways I could have improved the logic of the story, such as having Twilight's "backstory" be that she recently saw a family member engaged in sexual activity and is now curious about the whole thing. (Very curious
) But by then I had already formatted the story for fimfiction and everything, so... I'll try to do a bit better next time.
Fucking weird... but not that bad.
Loved the story! Also I wish there was a picture of celestia in all her glorious kinky gear
7408192 Greek mythology teaches us that God's like watching the world burn.
I have seen a few stories where they aren't related and tbh it kinda works which seems weird but it does... I think. But I could never ship them because after tons of stories and seeing tons of pics of them being cute and just being mischievous siblings I just can't see it and picturing it is not a nice image, it's like to me they don't fit with each at all.
When I read the name of the story, I imagined the more "standard" definition of milk.
...now I want to similar story, except that instead of Celestia being a futa, Twilight schemes to get Celestia pregnant so she'll start lactating.
7407665 Too sad Q_Q
7407852
I think it's this more than anything. They're so far removed from growing up together and the way they thought of the relationship as children that they can make clear decision, I think. They've had a lot of time to grow up and recontextual who they are, both to themselves and to each other.
I mean, you could also always not, and have them talk things out like reasonable adults* who aren't in a compromised lust-distracted position, and see what they actually come up with.
*Well, "incredibly sharp and savvy filly and living god who has lived more lifetimes than a small village", as the case may be, but y'know.
Please do.
I do kind of want to dispute this advice. I actually appreciated the story avoiding this cliche – Twilight having done all her own research and been proactive about it made things feel much less... creepy. She knew exactly what she was doing the entire time (to the point where she was thinking about it in a different context), which was a pleasant subversion of the usual foalcon corruption of the innocent schtick.
7408192 Incest as a kink is really funny in a way. It's hot when it's other people doing it.
*SQUEEEEE*
That was... not, what I'd expected when I checked here today...
My only real beef with the story is the ending. Spike feeding off Celestia's jisms.
i couldn't visualize all of celestias BDSM gear. especially the gems sections.
And here I thought I went overboard with random triggers sometimes. Love it.
7408972 I'm working on something, but i'm also doing a collab so mine is gonna take forever to come out
Did she just feed Spike several bottles of Princess spooge? That's one secret she should never share with Spike.
Exceptional! There was nothing about this that wasn't right. I especially like the description of Celestia's cum as magically potent (even lifegiving, apparently) and divine - really adds a much more powerful, personal, meaningful touch than just mindless bodily urges at work.
Though if Celestia is really that.... deep, and that lusty, you would think she would've discovered the joys of fisting much sooner. The descriptions of the way she clenched and drew at her toys definitely brought that image to mind; I suspect even as big and strong as she might be, a good forearm would definitively leave her feeling it. Oh well, I suppose that's a joy for some lucky Anon to introduce to her later.
The whole fic felt very much like a celebration of Celestia's body, unapologetic and shameless in the best way. That is, a rejection of the idea that a body that fine is anything to be ashamed of, or not to indulge in, at all. I can definitely get behind that.
A couple of questions :
How old is Twilight in this?
And will she ever tell Spike of this?
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That's... pretty much my own analysis, yes.
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If someone does a SFW image, I'll probably post it somewhere on here. If someone does a NSFW image, well... at least I can tell people that it exists and where to find it.
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If you can handle the end of this story, you can probable handle pretty much anything I can dish out. I have some other ideas involving changelings and the like, but I don't think any of it gets much kinkier than this.
I agree about the descriptions. It's a huge pet peeve of mine when things aren't described well and action is summarized in a clopfic, but I may have went too far the other way. I do enjoy purple prose, but in the future I'll try to use more discretion on where to use it and try to keep the pace a bit faster. I'll get a better hang of it with practice, hopefully.
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lol So many upvotes on this comment.
I'm sorry if I broke anybody's heart (or other organs) with my bizarre choice of fetish. I really thought I had prepared people pretty well, what with the super-blunt title, and the fact that "futalestia" and "semen worship" are the first two trigger warnings and lactation is nowhere on there at all. But I guess I should have specifically stated that lactation was not involved, and I DID try to do the socially-responsible thing and block the lactation group from being listed beside the story, since this clearly doesn't belong there.
Regular lactation is not really a top-tier fetish for me, but I could see Celestia (or possibly other characters, but Celestia is a top pick) getting pregnant at some point, not really as a huge fetish, but just because of story reasons. I wouldn't mind throwing in lactation at that point, if I ever get that far.
7410005
lol I'm glad SOMEBODY does. It was supposed to be funny and lighthearted while still being informative, but it's been very difficult to judge people's reactions so far. Maybe I'll just do regular trigger-warnings next time, I don't know.
And: oh, hey, I know you! I just finished "A Changeling Surprise" a few days ago. Didn't blow my mind or anything, but I enjoyed it. I have an enormous backlog of stories to read, but your other changeling fics are on it.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it! I couldn't find a place in this story to easily explain WHY alicorn semen was the solution, but since the story suddenly became popular and folks are wondering about it, maybe I will do that follow-up chapter I was thinking of and go into a little more detail. You're not so far off in your description of it, though; I'm glad you were paying attention.
While everyone is allowed their own fetishes and preferences, I think my reaction to Anon stories is roughly equivalent to many(most?) people's reaction to the end of this story. I think I would probably set my computer on fire and toss it out the window before I wrote a HiE story, unless it was for April Fool's or something. I would consider anthro or humanized ponies, though.
And yes, Celestia is one very sexy horse, but you couldn't tell that from how barren even most clopfics are in their descriptions of her. Just because we know her general appearance from the show is no excuse not to help the reader revel in her beauty a bit if that's what the story is all about.
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This story takes place a few months after Twilight gets her cutie mark and becomes Celestia's student. Beyond that, she's however old you imagine her being.
It is my current intention for Spike to be well aware of the situation, and to not really find it weird or abnormal given that's what he grew up with. I wasn't really intending it to be a super-dramatic reveal or anything.
7408992
That's an excellent articulation of my thoughts on princest, yes. If you haven't read it already, I can't really recommend Cuori Intrecciati and its prequel enough. Assuming you appreciate serious plot-with-porn like I do.
Yes, well, you make it all sound just so easy, don't you? (
) I'm a bit torn on how campy I want this... "universe" to go, since I have some ideas that are funny and silly and some that are quite a bit more serious. I guess I COULD just have them be in separate continuums, but I kind of like the perks of having a unified narrative and not having to explain why alicorns are packing a little something extra in every single story.
As a minor spoiler, my current thoughts on how Celestia comes to terms with the situation is by teaching Twilight one of her secrets for dealing with immortality, the principle of "some things, it's just better not to think about." I feel like that's a way to keep things "realistic" without getting bogged down in the weirdness of it, which is pretty much how I dealt with things this chapter.
Thank you for sharing this. My friend criticized me for trying to eat my cake and have it too, for trying to have Twilight be somehow both innocent and knowledgeable when it comes to sexual matters, and I can definitely see where he's coming from.
But he, not a fan of the fetish himself, also pointed out that most folks like foalcon for, as you say, the corruption of the innocent thing, and I also find that a bit... not to my taste. I honestly chose this story concept because I thought it was funny and cute, and purposively went out of my way to make Twilight the "aggressor," well-informed on at least an intellectual level, and not sexually penetrated or overtly taken advantage of at any point in the story.
Obviously in the real world we would do more than frown on anyone who treated this situation the way Celestia did in this story, but at least by internal story logic, the last thing I wanted her to come across as was a pedophile. I think I did that about as well as I could given the subject matter.
7408192
For me, incest is like bull riding, it's a lot of fun to watch (and read, I suppose) other people do it but not something I want to do myself. That could apply to like fifty percent of the stuff I'm into, honestly.
I really liked this story, especially the way you portrayed Twilight and her interactions with Celestia. I hope you write more stories in this universe, it seems like a fun place.
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Same. Incest stories aren't meant for you to place yourself and your family members into the situation. You're peeking through the next door neighbor's window as two hot sisters experiment with each other. Totally different.
7408192 In regards to your story, I think I'm in love... In regards to a previous comment involving Zeus & Co., did you know that Hera, Zeus's wife, is his older sister, whom he regularly cheats on in acts of both adultery, bestiality, and pedophilia? Not going for shock value; I'm just... Saiyan.
Hey, just wanted to say congrats on the feature, and looking forward to seeing what's next for you. Cheers!
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Now that those questions are answered:
overall I enjoyed the story. I think it gives an interesting look at how different and important Alicorns are to pony society. If Celestia had been flushing her excess into the environment, it might stand to reason that Equestria is so biodiverse and prosperous because of the life giving properties. (As compared to the badlands and frozen north)
Imagine if she didn't do so as much, and the relative magic level of the area went down as a result. There could be serious ramifications tied to Celestia's semen.
Anyway, good story. I'm interested to see what you come up with from here.
Also, if you need an editor, hit me up.
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I'm pleased that you spotted the environmental ramifications I had carefully hidden in the story. Indeed, the Milk of the Sun is actual a vital foundation for Equestrian ecology. Some question if the oddly temporally-dense distribution of near-apocalyptic events occurring so soon after Luna's return may be due to the destabilizing effect of Moon Milk's reintroduction to the biosphere.
Also, I think I'm good on editors at the moment, but if the situation changes, I'll let you know. Thanks for the offer!
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Thanks, man. The Life and Times of Deepthroat Cockslut is still one of my favorite clopfics of all time, and something that I'm trying to emulate, at least in certain regards, in my own work.
I am absolutely in love with this. More like this (those tags I mean, and Twilight and Celestia). I need more like this.
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Maybe the Nightmare was a result of the Earth getting "hungry" and cranky
Overall still very enjoyable for a lengthy clopfic.
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Hmm. Well, I am thinking of doing a follow-up chapter. Beyond that... I do have some more slice-of-life-esque ideas, although some are so interconnected that I might end up posting them as chapters in a single story. Not sure.
I'm also leaning more towards Princest and Twysalis than Twilestia as my "official" pairings, but I honestly haven't decided. The worst thing about writing stories about Nightmare Moon, Chrysalis, Luna, Celestia, and Twilight, is that I can't (realistically) ship them all together all at once, because I really do enjoy every possible pairing.
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I DID actually seriously consider tagging it comedy, but since the plot problem is technically "serious," I wasn't sure if it would qualify. I've gotten in trouble in the past for labeling my stories "comedy" when people were like, "this isn't comedy, this is just really witty!" and since I apparently have some kind of comedy dyslexia and can't tell the difference, I decided to just play it safe this time. The description should capture the tone of the story a little better, at least.
If you can enjoy it without being really turned on by the specific fetishes involved, then I must have elevated this from a "good clopfic" to a simply "good story." I'll take that as a huge compliment. I really enjoy "porn-with-plot" as a genre, so I'll be trying to write more good stories in the future.
7416725 No need to fear any repercussions on any of those fronts from me. I am fond of any and all of the possible combinations of those pones and bugz. My advice would be to work on the pairings you like best as I've found that motivation fails rather quickly when you don't have nearly as much interest in what you're writing as you would in other stuff. It's a huge shortcoming of mine.
I keep coming back to this. You got Celestia and Twilight together perfectly, well they fit together perfectly anyway. Shame this might be you're only one of Twilestia as you do it so great.
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I'm glad you took it that way because that's how I meant it. Even though I didn't think it was, for lack of a better word, "fappable," to me, I enjoyed reading it from beginning to end.
And you did write the sexy stuff well, I don't mean that you didn't. It just didn't quite hit my buttons enough. Although I'm somewhat fascinated by it, I don't fetishize bondage and restraint whatsoever.
The one thing I really did find sexy and I think you did excellently was the ball worship. Everyone always gets caught up in cock worship (which you also did well, though it didn't get the same "screen time"), and leaves the family jewels in the lurch. Not so here.
And I couldn't decide if it was clever, funny, sexy, or some combination of all three that by having it be Celestia, you took it even further to be actual worship.. Twilight calling Celestia's equipment divine and practically treating them as sacred.
So, tl;dr yes, yes I did indeed enjoy reading it just as a "story" with sexual elements, and I have no doubt that if I fetishized a couple more things I would have found it very sexually appealing as well.
I think you did a fantastic job.
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I don't actually fetishize foalcon or bondage really, at least not to this degree. After I got the initial concept for the "alicorn milk" from another, rather poorly written story, I just developed this mental image of fillyTwilight finding Celestia dressed to the nines in crazy fetish bondage gear while jacking off, and I thought it was pretty funny.
I do like the bondage gear, and it was fun to write, but I don't expect more than a light smattering of it in most future stories. Certainly it won't take the spotlight like this. Same with foalcon.
Balls are here to stay, though, dude; I practically squealed when I learned that the Family Jewels group is a thing. In my series, every big-name mare's gotta pair, and every pair is true and permanent; none of that spell-based crap. I don't know how many different ways I can make balls sexy or for how long, but if I continue to write clop, I'm damned well gonna try.
Also, I just realized that you're that guy that I offered to edit that Twilestia fic for. I hope you're still working on that; "I'll show you mine if you show me yours," except that I'm a whore, and I just showed you mine for free, so... don't leave me flappin' in the wind.
Dick-dock dick-dock, what will Twilight learn about Ceslestia's cock?
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Huh, so you are. I'm still working on ch. 1. I'm not happy with my transitions, and I'm trying to figure out how much sex I want in it (wow that's a sentence I don't think I'll say often). I may have something to send you guys tomorrow, though.
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lol I even sent you a link to "Alicorn Milk" ahead of time! You jerk.
I personally don't mind less sex if the not-sex is good. The best sexual content in my opinion is that in which you actually care about the characters and how the sex affects their relationship, all of which requires set-up. I don't think it's really enough to just assume people are going to care because they're canon characters, but maybe that's just me.
Looking forward to it.