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Ekhidna
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Ekhidna
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Well, not my usual cup of tea as I personally think that little scene at the end despite being somewhat sad, is also a little creepy in my opinion. Still, you did a good job on most bits and aside from that little ending it's not a half bad story.
7394927 That was kinda the idea, honestly XD.
Ekhidna, after reading One Last Chance and A Dragon's Treasure, I couldn't let this Sparity story pass up.
As usual, touching and nice story.
Also, Spike takes baths with Twilight, Rarity, and Starlight? Add in Princess Ember and the purple dragon would be one lucky son of a gun.
Small typo in the description. 'Carinval'
Another story from one of my fave authors! Once again, you don't disappoint.
I asked recently for a good new Sparity in the threads, and you have certainly delivered. Not only have I Favorited, but I also put this on my Multiread which only a few get on.
7394958 Glad you liked it! And I know what you mean
7395017 Fixed, thanks.
7395026 LoL
7395048 And you're one of my favorite authors, brother!
7395131 I'm honored, my friend.
And STILL friend zoned for the rest of their lives.......
For some reason I wasn't expecting something so sweet coming from you... I guess it's because, from your stories that I've read, you usually hide the most tender moments between moment of tragedy.
Absolutely lovely. Simple and sweet with some hope of happiness. Loving it.
Eagerly yet patiently awaiting more.
That was sweet nice work!
I generally agree with 7394927. Otherwise a good story.
Funny thing is, my mind kept going into the gutter, then jumping back up and considering that a society without a nudity taboo might be more casual about grooming too.
One thing I would criticize: You ought to work in the "time passes" in the narrative. Going "x time later" is the lazy way. A divider line and a "Rarity said after x exhausting hours" would do just fine with that.
All in all, pretty good.
P.S: Also, for every part after they finished the work, I couldn't help but think: "Mrs. Robinson, you're trying to seduce me. Aren't you?"
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS! <333333333333333333333333333
7399293 Glad you liked this. And as a small spoiler I'm telling you right now that there's another Sparity coming real soon after my next project.
Very sweet story, loved it.
Your take on Pony bathing culture is eccentric, but an interesting piece of world building.
Rarity sounds extremely creepy in her little monologue at the end. Especially against a background context in which Spike turned down a date with a grade-school-age filly earlier in the story. It's got weird vibes all over it
What a touching story, a really good work Ekhidna
The part when Rarity placed Spike on her before they slept was the most heartwarming part of the story
Excellent story.
Rarity comes off a bit creepy at the end, but it was also sweet to see that she does love him back as she's hinting.
thanks for this, i enjoyed reading it :)
I enjoyed this one.
Loved this fic!!! Especially reading the bathing part! I can imagine that part being an semi-anthro version of Spike and Rarity if you know what I mean!
Very sweet. I always figured ponies wouldn't care about someone seeing them in the bath because they don't wear clothes.