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The Adventure of His Life

A young pegasus pony named Clever Clogs arrives Ponyville one day with the only idea of finding a job using his 'charm' to get it, but this goes wrong and he ends up having some big trouble that could ruin and even end his life...

Can Clever Clogs overcome these dangerous problems?

Totally random idea I had at 1 A.M.

So please, don't be harsh

Also:

This has more chapters, so if you may, add it to the Tracking list, please, ok???

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Time Reaper

Time Reaper #1 · Jul 16th, 2016 · · · Ponyville ·

Un his way

On his way out,

Other problems I have found are on structure (or at least n the way your writing this), there's little description on what's going on (the town around him, the faces of those he interact with, etc) which give us little to feel when the time comes for the drama. If I find more details I'll tell you. But do give this a second read and fix a few details here.

John the brony and yknow