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Macro Zecora


I write macrophillia stories.

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I like where this is going and would like to see more. There are a few errors here and there, but overall, I enjoyed what I read.

Though small question. When Sonata absorbs a creature, are they still alive somewhere, or do they flat out die?

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They're still alive and aware. Sonata can feel them inside of her and communicate with them like a hive-mind. But she's the one in control of her body.

Could you point out some of the more glaring errors, so I can patch them up?

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“That’s what their called! Breasts.” said Sonata “Thanks for reminding me, Aria.”

Should be "they're"

I think I spotted a your in place of a you're somewhere, but I can't seem to find it.

I think you need to put more references to her size. Basically you've said she has grown only once, even though she ate so much afterwards.

How did you know I love slime assimilation stories! You read my secret fetish list? Lol

Fantastic story, all my fetishes say yes! Hope to see more

Awww yeah here we go. Hope to see more

i sense this is gonna be interesting

Nice to see the story back

Nice to see one of my favorite stories back. Can't wait for the next chapter

Came for the clop...Stayed for the plot! Really enjoying what you got going here!

Quick question: If she can give her "prisoners" a physical form, does that mean we could be possibly seeing Sonata creating an harem of goo-girls/boys in the near future? :rainbowwild:

If not, that's cool too. I'll be still look forward to reading your newest chapters!:twilightsmile:

still going eh? sweet, looking forward to more

Approve. Would like to see more of this. Superheroine Goo-nata now goes forward to rid Canterlot of evil by absorbing their mass and growing to epic sizes <3

Also Rainbow teaches her the magic of friendship or something and Sonata inevitably becomes good or something idk

I like this story. Will add to favorites. I hope Sonata does the right thing!

Interesting idea. if she turns into a hero i will fav this to go along with the up vote. ^_^

I have an idea: Adagio gets Sonata to go eat Sunset. When she gets to her house, Sonata finds that Sunset is sick with the flu and Flash, who she has gotten back with, is helping her. Sonata makes a tiny clone of herself as to not be seen and slips under the door. The clone fall into Sunset's soup, which is on a tray-table, and gets eaten by Sunset who then gets Sonata's powers.

I'm here for the blueberry jam nothing else *waiting with toast in hand, yup just waiting*:ajbemused:

Good stuff, just let Mega/Unideal do the editing from the grammar perspective and it will be even better!

7851926 Yes. I'm working on it. I have ~ 10K words written for Ch 5, but I need to decide what to put in and what to edit out.

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Almost done. I'll try to update by Friday or Saturday.

7857971 oh.

Oh okay.

Do you mind me asking why the updates are so sparse? You seem to have the time to write a one shot :P

7857978 I wrote most of that one shot a while back and never got around to finishing it.

Sorry. I don't have much feedback to give except it's quite good, and there's a typo in the second sentence.

I really liked this chapter.

Pretty good chapter, and Sonata is discovering how powerful she is, it's like One Peice Luffy was a rubber man, but unlike Fanstic four or Plastic man, he using his abiltiies in new ways and found other ways to increase or combine abitlies together.

im wondering if sonata CAN give others full freedom from her body

When is the next chapter

Possible Rainbow Dusk shipping?

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School has started for me again, so probably not for a couple of months.

well that was interesting

This fanfic makes me think of the story of one of my Slime OCs... Interesting.

Don't worry I don't think your ripping me off, FAR too many differences for you to be ripping me off. Still... Interesting that we both thought Slime Vigilante was a good idea.

Well then. That got dark real fuckin fast.

Fire, ice, and lightening. That's what my slime is weak to.

So far your Slime shows an aversion to fire. I wonder if the other two will hold true.

There may be a way around her weakness. If you think of it like this her gelatinous body is based on many chemicals from living being she has consumed. If she consumes enough, then she can condense the excessive parts of herself to be condensed into a hardened or even near metallic state which can be reabsorbed (albeit more slowly due to the condensation of said body part) and will ultimately give her more resistance if not immunity to her weakness. Plus helps with piercing into flesh a thing. This is called superhuman Bio-metamorphosis in my language (sad aint it) which allows an individual the ability to adapt and evolve their powers into something else. It's a thought.

7951877 yes please do this, she needs to eat that bussiness person that figured out her weakness

hope gladmane dies in a horrific way.. also poor sonata just wants love (gives a pinkie pie grade hug without concern for own safety)

What happened to the bath full of goo at Rainbows' place and half a bath at hers?

7952278 Honestly it wasn't that much difficult to figure it out but still he needs to go. You are right.

Is Fluttershy or pinkie pie going to be absorbed next

Wow- this is really great! Super glad I ran into this while looking for other stuff. :pinkiehappy:

I came for the fetishes and stayed for the plot. This actually has some surprising depth.

Also, Sonata's powers bring to mind another entity stored in my database. Absorbs people, is unreasonably attractive, can shapeshift into a squirrel, is only harmed by drastic temperatures... aha:

Adagio sighed and continued her gentle embrace of Mister Whiskers.

That not Adagio, is Sonata

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