The Crusaders have been attempting to get their cutie marks for years at this point. But as they start their teenage years, Life starts to change for them. School is getting harder, the teachers are getting more strict, And they are starting to look at colts differently, or in Scootaloo's case, one certain Unicorn has caught her eye. Will she be able to overcome this Feeling? Will they be able to overcome this? Only time will tell.
Looks good
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Thank you.
Aside from jumping in tense it is pretty good. Could also do with more description too, but that is me being nitpicky.
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Thank you for the feedback. I will attempt to fix that as soon as I can!