Rarity's Fetish

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RandomString

RandomString #1 · Jul 10th, 2016 · 2 · ·

Not into breathplay, but that was well written.

garatheauthor

garatheauthor #2 · Jul 11th, 2016 · 2 · ·

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Hey, thanks for the nice words. The reaction to this fic has been a bit rocky and I really appreciate them.

Bottom Out

Bottom Out #3 · Jul 12th, 2016 · 1 · ·

Nice story. I enjoyed it.

errant

errant #4 · Jul 18th, 2016 · 1 · ·

Other than a few grammatical and spelling mistakes, I enjoyed this. I think you did a good job with Rainbow's character, given the way she just says what she's thinking and annoys Rarity in the beginning. Also, obviously caring about her friends and not wanting to hurt one of them seems very appropriate for her. It made the story believable.

HatePlow