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Phoenix Nebula


Chaos is not the opposite of Harmony but apart of it. Both chaos and order together create a balance known as Harmony. Without one you cannot have have the other and without either there is nothing.

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Nightshade is an OC created by Ponybird21 and she made a request for someone to wright a story about her. Yes Phoenix is my OC and I know no one likes him, but I don't really care.


Alone, cold, and wet. Nightshade makes her way through the Everfree Forest looking for a place to stay. One day a pony by the name of Phoenix finds her cold and miserable. Phoenix promises to watch over her and takes her back to his Universe. Life is great... until some cult decides it wants her to make her the Evil ruler of the world. Yeah things went down hill real fast.


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Update 10/27/16: This has become more of a colab with ponybird21.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 11 )

Good work
I'm gonna sleep now.

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Yeah I need some rest too.

Weewooweewooweewoo bromance between Discord and Phoenix are in effect! The two at bestest of best friends!!!!!! :rainbowwild::rainbowlaugh::trixieshiftright::twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp::yay::trollestia::eeyup::duck::raritystarry::raritywink::ajsmug:

Why don't people like Phoenix?

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Yeah I decided Discord's character would be a good parallel to Phoenix's

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Because sometimes people are full of Bull**** against powerful ocs. Even if ocs aren't over powerful.

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People call him a Gary Stu he has a lot of power and is practically a god. He can't die but he dose have his limits. Most people just see a character with godlike power and instantly label it as a Gary Stu with out even considering them passably having a relatable character. There is a lot more to Phoenix than meets the eye. He considers all his talent a curse because he hardly has to learn anything. When he comes across something he isn't used to he gets uncomfortable on confused. He isn't used to being challenged so it's foreign to him. Most people don't care if your character has a lot of power he has no character end of story. That's the kind of thing a lot of OCs get.

Pretty good! Love the new chapter, need help with the next one?

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Maybe I have a plan but it will have to wait till well after my surgery.

I'm surprised no one has noticed how I purposely made the Unicorn colt dumb as s**t. Usually the smart one is the unicorns, but I decided to agents that fandom trope and made the earth pony the smartest of the three.

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