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Urimas Ebonheart


Writer and Spriter.

Comments ( 57 )

So fucking good! You have a knack for clop my good man. Keep up the good work in both the main story and here.

Lol. Man that'd be an interesting life to live, not talking about all the death and shit. But the clop is 10 outta 10, except maybe the second one with the queen of the spiderponies.

7399579 maybe to peeps with arachnophobia, but not to insectphiles

Not bad bro. You have a talent for all things clop, bit short but eh, quality over quantity

I know I should have came by now but I feel like I can go for hours! Has becoming a demon increased my endurance and stamina?

Well, at least we know how he's gonna make it up to Cadence when this is over.:eeyup:

7535969 thats gonna be a wildcard encounter. Ether she's gonna be pissed as all hell at ether him or damion, gonna run in tears, or maybe both, or take it well.

That whole your all mine bit. Should we be worried about that?

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Oh. Well... Frig. Hmm. Could a bonk to the head help him? If not then I'm out of ideas.

7536509 It's more instinctual, she's a willing source of lust to him so he'll want to keep her, same as Twilight is starting to do with Damien.

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same as Twilight is starting to do with Damien.

Does that mean she isn't starting to develop genuine feelings for him, or that the development is simply being jumpstarted by her new instincts?

A:
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B:
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7537914 It's a factor, her new instincts are telling her to stay near him to feed from but the way he and Desire are treating and teaching her is infatuating her as well.

Not gonna lie, I coulda gone without a Shining X Gilda chapter.

7544037 Don't read it then, that's why they're here and not in the main story :)

I'm not a big fan of having to go to another story for clop, especially when the main story already has the appropriate tags for it to be there. It's much more convenient to the readers to just mark clop stories so that people can skip if they so choose, or just keep reading without having to leave the story.

7786321 Eh was trying something new. If people didn't want to see any trace of clop then they stick to the main story, if people just want the smut, it's all here to reading easily.

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Yeah, well I finished the main story before I even figured out there was clop for it here. There weren't any links on the main story or even hints towards clop at all, except where you suggested Shining X Gilda clop. I thought the story just had all that happen 'off stage'. I'm not even the only one that didn't know, because this comment.

Also, this just seems like a story where it's impossible to get completely away from, cue Desire stage left.

Excellent work bro. Bit short but thats alright.

I'm not gonna lie...... I was actually turned on by the way you described Arachne this chapter(Ahh the return of the why boner)..... And while I doubt it...... I hope she becomes one of his mates.... Good shit man.

Interesting chapter, as well as some light hearted clop. Very nice. Also heres a correction for you to fix.

"You've taken a liking to my cum haven't you?" I tease her making her.

The "making her" bit is unneeded dialogue and train wrecks the flow.

honestly i've been trying to wrap my head around this whole

naga sex with human thing

how the hell do the positions work? very confusing

and it's mostly because they have no legs

so their privates are close to where the stomach would be

how in the world would that work?

weird

"She's also getting quite hungry," desire comments making Twilight blush.

Desires name is lower cased

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Do you really need all of those spaces? Ellipses were made for a reason!

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Spaces are the dominant race

Ellipses are sucky

All

Hail

Spaces!!

Can't wait for the next chapter come out hope it be soon

Will this story have any sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?

Pretty sure he risked venereal diseases, especially when he gave oral to what amounted to a prostitute.

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But demons here are immune to diseases, their energy kills any foreign cells or bacteria.

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