Long ago in the pre-classical era of Equestria, a wizard summoned a baron of hell from the depths of Tartarus. After a horrific battle, the demon was defeated but it was prophesied that one day it would return, and only the Elements of Destiny would defeat it once and for all.
Octavia Melody, a cello player from an orchestra set out to pursue her unrequited dream to rock. Vinyl Scratch, a famous DJ longs for a sense of camaraderie. Pinkie Pie is here just for fun.
Rated T for Retarded: Bad jokes, Swear words, Bod Grammer
"This is not the greatest fanfiction in the world, no! This is just a tribute."
Special thanks to DashieSparkle for Vinyl's vector, HareTrinity for Octavia's vector for the poster
Chapters (3)
"This is not the greatest fanfiction in the world, no! This is just a tribute."
In all seriousness though, this is just amazing. Pure awesomeness. Rob me of my likes, why don't you?
7374602 Heey! I should've used that line... can I put that in the description?
7374605 Sure
OMG YESSS I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RN
I LOVE THIS MOVIE AND VINYL AND OCTAVIA
THIS WAS LIKE MADE FOR ME
7374698 I did made it for you. Totally surprised you huh
7374707 Woah
Thanks person I have never spoken to for making this for me
No but really
Great story!
7374605
Y-YOU FIEND! BUY ME DINNER FIRST BEFORE YOU TAKE MY LIKES!!!!
Absolute majesty.
+1 for MetalTavi
and then the downvotes came for The Metal
I'm calling it now the pick of destiny is discord's tooth.
Interesting start. I'll lurk a bit too see where this goes. I did notice a few grammatical errors here and there, but I can't tell if they're intentional or not. I blame your description.
Jack Black: "Does this mean I'll have to go brony now?"
7374748 But they failed, as they where strucken down to the ground!
Hello all. Sorry the second chapter took so long.
It's not my fault though, It was this guy in the comments I think that had a Skyrim-related dp which made me remember I had Skyrim installed so I played and downloaded mods for so long I don't remember when I stopped.
Remembering that Bethesda, the studio behind Skyrim also made Fallout 3 made me want to install Fallout: New Vegas again and download a sarsparilla-ton of mods and play the story and all the DLCs all over again. I stopped playing New Vegas a few days ago, I was starting to run out of new places to discover.
What I'm trying to say is, the reason this chapter took so long is all because of that guy with the Skyrim-related profile picture, so blame him. I don't remember his name though.
Hopefully, if someone with a Deus Ex profile picture comes along, the next chapter wouldn't be postponed indefinitely.
What is Bod Grammer?
7538252 It's Bad Grammar.
I, uh, intentionally misspelled it. I thought it was... funny... at the time... ahem
Huh, and interesting start to this. I do wonder who the narrator is, though. In the movie it was (I'm pretty sure anyway, not able to check right now to make sure) Jack Black's character. And we've met our full cast (apparently), so I'm wondering who that leaves. Look forward to finding out, assuming that it's not your generic omniscient narrator type.
Either case, they have a very David Wong feeling about them, so good on that.
“Brock! In front of Button?”
“What? It's not like he doesn't have one of his own. Handles it on a daily basis after all.”
Heh, I never understood the reluctance of some parents to admit their kids have body parts that they personally deal with several times a day yet are never told about.
Also, no questions about ill-timed drug flashbacks or picking the wrong day to quit huff glue from Vinyl when the demon appears? Missed an easy one there.
Surprised Vinyl wasn't affronted being mistaken for a guy there.
Not a bad chapter, you did awkward-as-fuck well. Though you could look into formatting to distinguish the scroll from the narration. Italics or the quote tags would work (the latter would be... interesting to see given the closely interwoven narration in some parts).
7538517 Thanks for all the feedback! The formatting for the second chapter was definitely something to improve on, even my friend who I asked to proofread it first thought the same way. I probably got lazy, definitely will improve upon that
Thanks again for reading!
Also - David Wong! One of the best writers, I do love Cracked so much, wish he would write more often even something where he just complain about something, I don't know, just anything.
Welp... It seems I've fallen for this crackfic.
7544141 In only two chapters? I wonder if my mention of David Wong did the trick, or the barrage of references I keep putting in.
7545326
I got absolutely none of those.
The reason I fell for it is how asinine the story is, but a t the same time, it does it in a way that pays off with comedy rather than a bad story.
7545330
Huh, I didn't try to be too obscure XD I feel a little sad.
Well, thank you! I agree, I think of the stupidest plot sometimes
7545389
I just don't get music references, sorry.
7545396 Uh, Its alright. I have a few Star Wars references there - the more obvious ones.
The main thing for me though is if I made you laugh, not if you get my references.
7545415
Right then, I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter then!
7545418
Very well, good sir.
Didn't someone else make a similar story ?